Hi Baco,
Thanks for your submission. I'm liking this!
I like that it's "clean" and too the point.
A couple of questions...
1. Can you add to this some graphic idea that "sells the sizzle"? Maybe a guitar, big star, concert crowd, stage lights or something? I'm not sure what, but some cool idea that is in the background?
2. What about another version where the name & tag line are reversed. Tag on Top in color & my name below in grey?
I'm liking your idea, so if you can give me a couple more versions that would be great! Thanks.
Robin