Road WarriorLogo Design Contest

Tried to go with something, simple, smart and clean. If there is anything I can do, just let me know.

Thanks!

Thank you for your submission. I liked the globe, however the line across the top is very heavy. Also, you missed my comment that "Road Warrior" should take a backseat to "Insights". Thanks again! Joyce

Thanks for your feedback. The line across the top is like the top of a warrior's helmet (don't know what its called). I'll try to make some tweaks...

#29 is a plane flying through a speech bubble representing you giving your "insights."

new concept in #33. I hope you like it.

Thanks for all of your excellent designs. Do you think you could take #29, flip the image so that the plane is flying forward and make the vapor trail more of a smile? I sincerely appreciate the effort you are putting into this contest. Joyce

I just noticed you were talking about entry #29 but I applied your feedback in entry #34. I will work on the changes to #29 now.

Thanks

I had a hard time making the smile work in entry #35. It just didnt look natural and didnt match with this particular concept.

kyro,

You really did an excellent job with #34. You really did make the smile work. Unfortunately, that is not one of the ones that my team likes. It was the #29, now #35.

Thanks very much!

Joyce

I submitted a couple of different concepts in #63 and #64 to try to explain what you will be doing. Let me know if there is anything else I can do.

Thanks

also #65. colors and fonts can be updated later if you like any of my concepts...

Kyro, please accept my apology for not having responded sooner. I DO like many of your designs and I also like your choice of two blues a lot. May I see Entry #63 without the pen and paper? And on Entry #64, I do not know the significance of the point at the bottom on the left, unless that was supposed to be part of the callout (caption bubble), but it is lost on most people, including me. I also liked your Entry #66, however can you make the figure unisex? Thanks for all of your efforts. They are appreciated. Joyce

Joyce,

Thank you for the feedback. I made the requested changes.

#71 - the point at the bottom is part of the speech bubble so I tried to make this clearer.

#72 - Removed pen and writing.

#73 - Unisex figure.

Please let me know if there is anything else I can do. Thanks!

Kyro,

Congratulations, it looks like it's your logo that my team has settled on! Would it be possible to see #73 with the new tag line: "brings the joy and ease back to travel", but a little bolder and with the whoosh under the "joy" and "ease". Plus, we need to add some color---perhaps a dark orange? If this is against the rules, then we will have to do this after the contest. I sincerely appreciate all of your efforts. Thank you! Joyce

Great! Thanks for choosing me! No this is not against the rules but only the 1st ranked designer can submit changes to their designs while in judging mode. I can make those changes once you slide me into first place.

Thanks again,

Kyro

Joyce,

I probably will not be able to get to this tonight. I will try to do it as soon as I can but we have a lot of family coming in town for my 3 year old's birthday tomorrow so I hope you can be patient with me during this weekend.

Thanks so much

Absolutely, Kyro. Sorry, I thought I had re-ranked the logos, before we went to dinner. Congrats on your child's BD. MUCH more important for you to be there. Enjoy! Joyce

Joyce, I submitted a few different options. I think #82 is my favorite. Let me know if any of them work for you or if you want to see any other changes. Thanks again for your patience.

Kyro,

I love #80, except can you make the whooshes the lighter blue, instead of the darker? Then I am ready to Select you as the winner. I like #82 second best, but Suke did so much work I want to give her second and third places. I hope you understand? Joyce

Kyro,

The color of whooshes I am asking for is the one you used on #72. Be sure to read my previous email for other information. Thanks, Joyce

Joyce, please also see entry #85 which uses no gradients but just flat colors. Looks a bit cleaner in my opinion.

Thanks!

another color combo in #89...

Kyro,

I know you're going to be disappointed, but I called my branding agency yesterday and spoke with their graphics person. She liked the heart that Suke had created and I and going with that one. I am also giving you #s 2 and 3. Because of your efforts over the weekend, I would like to send you a check anyway. (I will need your contact information so that I may send you the check.) It won't be $400, but it is a token of my gratitude. Many thanks! Joyce

Hi Joyce. I understand. Thank you. I can PM you my information.