RMS - Retail Marketing ServicesLogo Design Contest

Thank you

here the updated.
any other suggestions or feedback are welcome.

rgds,

here the updated.
any other suggestions or feedback are welcome.

rgds,

here the updated.
any other suggestions or feedback are welcome.

rgds,

Done. Thank you for the education and your assistance

thanks for the feedback and suggestions.
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rgds,

Real strong contender for us. Our team would like to see another font for the RMS. We saw you tried toi keep the same as our Shopping cart logo.
Use your creativity to come up with another font type. Also the third dot has a price tag. Would like it to be a coupon, or scissors or something coupon related. Maybe a third color...maybe the line?
Thank you