Dear Good Guy....your design is more than good! We really think it is strong and it is going in the right direction. Is there anyway to reflect all four RMC passions (cigar, scotch or beer, sport and cards) ...we know this is a challenge b/c we don't want the creative to get too busy, but we thought we would at least ask you to try. Maybe instead of the ribbon, you use a cigar? By the way, we didn't love the golf club execution b/c this creative become too preppy and too "buffy meets mitsy at a country club in greenwich , ct...too high brow"....can't wait to see the next version!!!! TY.