Hi! Thanks for pulling off the red ribbon! I'm not sure what other ideas we have, I feel like the slogan gets lost down there. I really want that to stand out as much as possible. Do you have any other thoughts? We're not very creative!!
Hi! Thank you for making those changes. I'm actually not sure that the "All-Jersey" ribbon wouldn't look better somewhere else on the label. Could we try taking that off and focusing more on the slogan and making it bigger and stand out more?
Hi! The cows look great! I'm not entirely sure how many changes you are allowed/supposed to make before the "finalist" section, but if you can still make changes and would be willing to could you take out the milk can and grass altogether? If it wouldn't be too cluttered, we'd like to see "All-Jersey" on there if possible. Possibly in the spot where the milk can is. Or, maybe a ribbon? This is another all-jersey creamery with an example of their ribbon - http://www.simplynaturalcreamery.com/ -- Thank you either way! We love this design!
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Here are 2 new ideas on the slogan part, this one with a grass shape behind.
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Here are 2 options, with a simple ribbon, hope you like it. If there is any idea you want to try, please tell me, happy to work on it.
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Thank you so much!
Olivia
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I'll get back first hour on the morning with the requested change.
Thank you for the feedback.
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