Okay, I think we like the font for Creamery the best for this one. If it's not too much trouble, can we see this one with Creamery outline remaining in blue and see both the bottom and top line above Riverbend in blue and then both the bottom and top in blue. I think a variation of this is the way we are leaning. Sorry for the hassle and thank you so much for your patience and edits! I look forward to working with you more!
I've used the font before for Creamery and I've detached the letters an increases readability 2 fold.
Scaled up Creamery a wee bit to help balance the design and readability.
This font is one of my faves to work> did look for an alternate script, 60% the C looks like an E. 15% it boils down to readability and the other 15% are garbage.
We are a bit conflicted between this one and 119. On this one, we like that creamery is in blue and stands out. On 119, we like that the lines above and below on Riverbend makes the river reed stand out better. Do you have any thoughts?
One of our concerns is being able to read creamery on a label, since we haven't designed that yet or anything.
Hi! Love this!!! Could we see this exact layout and colors with the river reed you have it in #97 and then see what it would look like with the ribbon part that is above and below Riverbend in blue and creamery written in green, but with the river reed from 97?
Hi! Can I see this one with creamery written in white?
And then can I see it and the ribbons outside of creamery in green and the font white?
Is there a way to close the gap between the bottom of the word Riverbend and the ribbon out to the side of creamery? Not a huge deal, just didn't know; although, it might clutter it up too much.
So, I like the river reed best here with less of the white outline on the seed head. Could we try having the word creamery in green and not covering the e if possible, maybe moving it more to the right? And having the lines that come out of creamery be blue?
Premium Jersey Milk it's out of place. this is what I was referring to about the added text. the Premium should be a separate element placed on the label.
This is really neat and so many marketing avenues we could take with this!! Can the river reed "V" set behind the "e" like it is with the I, or somehow not cover it up as much? Also, can you move the cows slightly toward the left or make that middle cow center?
I love this design and the colors. Would it be possible to take out the blue ribbon at the bottom and have creamery somewhere else and still in cursive?
update including a few artistic changes too. You requested additional text, in my opinion the added " Premium Jersey Milk" should be added to the label as a separate statement..
2 reasons
1. the logo already has a tag adding another complicates the design.
2. Placing the " Premium Jersey Milk" as a separate label element make more of a statement rather than radon text added to the logo.
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Scaled up Creamery a wee bit to help balance the design and readability.
This font is one of my faves to work> did look for an alternate script, 60% the C looks like an E. 15% it boils down to readability and the other 15% are garbage.
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I do not feel labeling it will be an issue ether blue or green outline.
It will take me a wee bit to find a replacement typeface the addresses your concerns
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One of our concerns is being able to read creamery on a label, since we haven't designed that yet or anything.
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it looks best, this will apply to any new updates
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Update to the withdrawn #100
1. used the original banner
2 reduced Creamery outline
I've also withdrawn many other not in contention
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Thank you so so so much!!
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And then can I see it and the ribbons outside of creamery in green and the font white?
Is there a way to close the gap between the bottom of the word Riverbend and the ribbon out to the side of creamery? Not a huge deal, just didn't know; although, it might clutter it up too much.
Thanks for all your hard work on this!
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So, I like the river reed best here with less of the white outline on the seed head. Could we try having the word creamery in green and not covering the e if possible, maybe moving it more to the right? And having the lines that come out of creamery be blue?
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1. Creamery font and tag alternate script style font.
2. Creamery is larger and stand out more that on the banner
3. The Riverbend is straight to accommodate for the Creamery.
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I highly recommend this version
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I do not recommend this version
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Absolutely love this design!!
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Could we see it with a fiffeeent colored outline than green? And maybe a different type of cursive for Creamery?
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Can we see this one with a blue border instead of a green border? Or a different color than the green?
Also, I like the idea of a pretty cursive instead of block for the word creamery? Possibly a different font for the slogan?
Your work is beautiful and I love the artistic talent!
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your thoughts?
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2 reasons
1. the logo already has a tag adding another complicates the design.
2. Placing the " Premium Jersey Milk" as a separate label element make more of a statement rather than radon text added to the logo.
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I'll make the other adjustments awe well and a few of my own too.
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Can we pull the riverbend down a touch so as not to cover up the far right cows face?
Can we change the brown color ribbon and "from our grass to your grass" to maybe blue or more of a royal gold color?
Can we add a ribbon or tag line somewhere with All-Jersey or Premium Jersey Milk?
This is really nice and unique!!!
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The layout is based on Blue ribbon award style