Hi David. Thanks for the submission. Our concern is that the river looks like a leaf. The yellow text might be hard to read on a church sign or even on the video projector during services. Thank you.
Here are some amendments. I took into deep consideration the issue that was had with my initial entries: The icon I used could not easily be deciphered as waves. However, I went back to the drawing board and tried to do something VERY different. I hope these are to your liking and I hope these layouts depict whole new possibilities. Thank You.