We prefer Entry #1 because of the color scheme, but I wonder if you could include a warm color also. You could also adjust the lines that radiate from the cross, making them not so dramatic. I like the type treatment, but I am not completely happy with the type face for "River". It looks a little dated....perhaps some with with more elegant serfs? Thank you!
I like the blue/green of number #1, but the light blue of #2 seems to wash out some and is less sharp, even against a white background. I wonder if the green was retained but the blue was made a little darker, if that would help with contrast. And can we see these in black and white versions?
Also, would it be possible to have you send us another, different, fresh idea? Something different? Thank you!
Thank you for the black and white version. Would you consider changing the font on "river" to make it less heavy on the serifs? Something that looks a bit more contemporary? If you could just send a couple of versions with a different font, it would help. Thank you!