One more change if you have time. take out the extra 2 people at the bottom and the line under Challenge.
thanks it is decision day - hope they make a decision
Thanks, definitely feeling a bit better than yesterday. :)
I made the people a bit more sleek, but I can also make them more stylized, you know, a bit more swooshy :D. As you probably already know, the concept here is that the team is working on "the challenge" by placing the dot (star in this case over the "i") the figure being the "i" visually. I figured that if I use the DNA as a ladder, then there needs to be a goal, the challenge can't just be to climb a ladder. This way we have a goal (challenge) AND it's resolved by the team. (who says "There is no "I" in team" - LOL)
Please let me know if you would like me to work on other revisions or even concepts.
sorry you are not well. I think they would consider either style. The way you did it is excellent - maybe stay with the same design - change colors to blues and greeens and make one of the characters a female? I am doing a separate google doc with this concept - They are leaning this way but might go back to the rocket - you never know. I like yours a lot.
Thanks for the message. :) I'm a little under the weather today, but I will work on the suggested changes as well a variations of it. Do you know if the client prefers realistic silhouettes or should I make them more stylized?
We really like the image conveyed of helping others. Some thoughts on variants: different colors especially using a dark royal blue, add more people (not sure where or how), different looking people - some female
I was removing the designs that I thought were not in contention so that the contest does not get too cluttered. I saw that they did not fair well after the site said you ranked so I pulled them.
I'll put them back, just let me know which are "NI" and I'll get those out of your way. :)
Not sure since he only started looking at them. But he did emphasize SIMPLE and the ones he seems to like are more "iconic" in look - they have a lot of rockets now - maybe something else that says "rising"? or challenges? No one has done going up a ladder to reach stars yet.
Thanks. These were just the first things, I came-up with. I'll also try some other ideas. The thing, I'm not too sure about is, if you want more serious, more whimsical, simpler... please let me know, and I'll work in that direction.
I know we could omit the white ink on the white shirts and the black ink on the black shirts, but it may be more cost effective to just have one set of color separations and run as 4 inks on all the shirts. Hope that make sense. :)
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Is the one I uploaded how you wanted it?
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thanks it is decision day - hope they make a decision
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I made the people a bit more sleek, but I can also make them more stylized, you know, a bit more swooshy :D. As you probably already know, the concept here is that the team is working on "the challenge" by placing the dot (star in this case over the "i") the figure being the "i" visually. I figured that if I use the DNA as a ladder, then there needs to be a goal, the challenge can't just be to climb a ladder. This way we have a goal (challenge) AND it's resolved by the team. (who says "There is no "I" in team" - LOL)
Please let me know if you would like me to work on other revisions or even concepts.
Thanks!
Marcelo
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Thanks for the message. :) I'm a little under the weather today, but I will work on the suggested changes as well a variations of it. Do you know if the client prefers realistic silhouettes or should I make them more stylized?
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I figured I'd try some in a totally different direction, since you never know what may stick. :)
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I was removing the designs that I thought were not in contention so that the contest does not get too cluttered. I saw that they did not fair well after the site said you ranked so I pulled them.
I'll put them back, just let me know which are "NI" and I'll get those out of your way. :)
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Thanks. These were just the first things, I came-up with. I'll also try some other ideas. The thing, I'm not too sure about is, if you want more serious, more whimsical, simpler... please let me know, and I'll work in that direction.
Thanks!
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I kept the design to:
Black
Red
Yellow
White
I know we could omit the white ink on the white shirts and the black ink on the black shirts, but it may be more cost effective to just have one set of color separations and run as 4 inks on all the shirts. Hope that make sense. :)
Marcelo