I very much like the general concept and layout of your design. I would like to see basic shapes removed/replaced and use of bright, non-primary colors to make it a little older. We use a lot of bright orange, bright blue, lime green, and bright pink in the store. Possibly a different secondary element like mentioned in my recent general comment could work well. What do you think about a paintbrush for the "I" in "Right", then either no elements over brain or older ones like gears, magnifying glass, yo yo type stuff?
Nice work! Thanks so much for your efforts :)
Nikki