Thank you so much for your great feedback!
We’ve revised the design to align with your vision:
- The lettering has been updated to a clean typewriter-inspired style, giving it a bold yet classic touch.
- The dog illustration is now simplified — moving away from the skeleton version — and infused with a striking tribal tattoo design, which keeps it unique and full of character.
This way, the overall composition looks modern, edgy, and memorable while staying minimalistic and easy to apply across different media.
Please let us know how this direction feels to you — we’d be more than happy to fine-tune the details further based on your preferences.
This is super cool! Could the lettering be like typewriter style?
And can the dog be plain with no skeleton?
Or instead of skeleton, tribal tattoo design?
This is looking really cool! If the lettering could be more squared away
And I’d like the dog to have its feet on the ground, no drink in the paw.
Super cool!
Hi capitolflair,
I’d love to hear your feedback on my entry.
If you have any suggestions, just let me know — I’ll be more than happy to make revisions and refine it for you.
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We’ve revised the design to align with your vision:
- The lettering has been updated to a clean typewriter-inspired style, giving it a bold yet classic touch.
- The dog illustration is now simplified — moving away from the skeleton version — and infused with a striking tribal tattoo design, which keeps it unique and full of character.
This way, the overall composition looks modern, edgy, and memorable while staying minimalistic and easy to apply across different media.
Please let us know how this direction feels to you — we’d be more than happy to fine-tune the details further based on your preferences.
Warm regards, mbahdjoyo
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And can the dog be plain with no skeleton?
Or instead of skeleton, tribal tattoo design?
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In this version:
The lettering is bold and squared within a frame, giving the logo a stronger and more structured presence.
The dog sits naturally on the ground, creating a more grounded and iconic look.
The overall composition aims to feel balanced, clean, and impactful, making it versatile for different applications (print, digital, and merchandise).
I wanted to share this option so you can compare both approaches and see which one feels like the best match for your brand’s identity.
I’d love to hear your thoughts on whether this variation resonates with your vision, or if you’d like me to fine-tune any detail further
Best regards,
mbahdjoyo
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please take a look
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I’ve made revisions based on your notes:
The lettering is now more squared/cleaned up for a stronger, modern look.
The dog’s feet are grounded, giving it a more natural and solid stance.
Removed the cocktail glass, so the focus stays on the character, as you suggested.
I’d love to hear your thoughts—if there are any details you’d like me to refine further, I’ll be more than happy to adjust
Best regards,
mbahdjoyo
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And I’d like the dog to have its feet on the ground, no drink in the paw.
Super cool!
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I’d love to hear your feedback on my entry.
If you have any suggestions, just let me know — I’ll be more than happy to make revisions and refine it for you.
Best regards,
mbahdjoyo