I like where this is going. I like that you incorporate the tag line as well. I am torn about having an RE logo seperate from Revolution. It reads like RE Revolution which plays off the tagline and I am torn between the blue/ black logo and the read. I even like the stacked version on #15.
15,16,17 Can I see a DD in place of the RE in the blocked logo. and then David down the left side of the box and Donaldson along the bottom, in a small font.
Can we try it with REvolution(notice the font size difference, with the RE in red like before and place my name outside the DD box David down the left side and Donladson along the bottom.
I really like the look of this but growing concern is it is to dark. I like red and black and it works with other logos but this will be on a sign as well as print ads. They need to know it is real estate driven and the house helps make that point but it is hard to see. so is there anything we can do to develop it?