Entry 1, Really like it. It is differnt from some of the modern samples I have and I like the house incorporation. Not sure if I like the half moon swoosh but agree that it does need something else. Thats for using the tag line.
just had a thought, have you seen how infinty uses a simple brush stroke to show an outline of a car and it loolks like one of the m series cars, what if we were able to similate that with a house. LEt me know if you can picture what I am thinking.