Good start :)
I'd like to see #8 bolder with a smaller simpler letter "R". Also we try the words "salon and spa" in a silver/nickle color. Can we also try th new simpler version of the "R" in the backround similar to #13 as a watermark dripping a drop of water and ripple like #12.
I like to see #13 with the same concept but softer lines in the word "Revive". Also, canwe try a different shape for the dot above the letter "i" that simbolizes tranquility. And a much simpler watermark in the backround without the swirls or much less of them. With those changes, maybe a different color for the words "salon and spa".
With #10the letter "R" and "e" create the letter "X" which could give off the impression of medicine wth "Rx". Also, the back of the letter "R" looks similar to a backwords B. Maybe something less connected or even something different all togeter.
Thank You! I look forward to seeing the changes :)