Review RevolutionLogo Design Contest

I like the multi color talk bubble. Is there a way to make it look good without 2 people?

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Could you make this circle/talk bubble smaller in diameter and possibly make the talk bubble a little more noticeable.

update entry, basic from your requested

Also instead of dots is there away to do text lines in the most visually simple and pleasing way?

Also what would this look like with an empty talk bubble instead of 3 dots in the version shown here?

thankyou for your feedback,
I will update your requested

I like where you are going with this. Any other variations of the shape of the talk bubble that are less like a hexagon.