#4 -- I appreciate the design features incorporated into the typography but unfortunately can't use it #3 - Image is much too large and words "speech and swallow" much too small; also don't like image #1 - this has potential but would need design feature smaller and "speech and swallow" much larger, and no graphic modifications to typography
many thanks for your comment, here i submit new one at entry #43 for font changing and more bigger word "speech and swallow" and if here any else, feel free to send comment
I like the concept of the logo as a speech bubble -- can you provide any other variations? Also, despite liking purple and orange, I am starting to feel it's garish -- most of the submissions are defaulting to those colors even though I've asked for others. Could you take a look at the other examples I've added to my brief and see what you could do? I'm interested in seeing: overall cooler colors (blues, greys, purples, greens) with perhaps a brighter accent; and an image that's a little retro-ish / simple / declarative. Thanks!!
#4 -- I keep coming back to this -- I really like it more and more over time. It's a very classy design. I'm concerned that it isn't easy enough to read for some people ... any way to keep the integrity of the design but make it a little more legible -- and enlarge the words "speech and swallow"? Thanks!!!
#4 - I've ranked this design #1 now -- so glad I went back to it and ignored my own initial reaction. It's really grown on me and I think it just needs a little tweaking. I think the main thing to be done might be to make the face in the O sharper/clear and also bring the edges of the O around a little more to make it read more like an "O" ... if that makes sense ... thanks.
Hi -- Thanks for the modifications! Could I please see the type changes made in the same colors as #4? Also, I really like the partially-open O (was trying to get it only slightly more closed, not all the way) ... but maybe forget about that for now, and just focus on trying to make the facial features a little clearer? I'm afraid that in business card size it will get too indistinct or fuzzy. Don't know if it's possible but hopefully it's worth trying. Thanks!!
Even if you can't do the revisions right away, could you just drop me a quick note to let me know you're in the process? I'm slightly anxious as there are only a couple more days of the contest. Thanks!
Thanks for your comment and feedback, I will make base on your need for your logo. Don't worry about timeless I will send some option base on your last comment
Here i submit new entry base on your last feedback for font color and more bold word Speech also i have make how logo in different background color as option how logo work on media #153 #154 #155 #156 #157 Feel free for any assistance
Thank you for the new submissions. I would like to focus on #155 -- i've ranked it first and it's definitely my favorite by far.
Is it possible to try the following?
1. Change the color of ":Restorative" to a slightly lighter shade, more like a deep, dusty plum, and change the color of "speech and swallow" to a dark grey
2. Put the words "speech and swallow" in bold type
3. Extend the line of the back of the head" in the O just slightly to give the head more definition
4. Anything else you can do to make the features (nose, chin, forehead) in the face sharper and crisper -- I'm afraid they might not be visible at business card-size.
6. Maybe put the face slightly more in the center of the O?
Ketut -- talk to me ... do you need more time to accomplish the revisions? Should I try to extend the contest? You're the only one I'm working with and asking for revisions, just so you know.