Appreciate your options, but this is definitely the wrong direction for us. It's getting more confined or squished. Preferred the external sun, too. Will rank.
It might also help us to reduce the impact of the red...maybe make the top arc a medium gray? Or keep it red and set Restart and the bottom arc as medium gray?
Thanks for listening to our feedback and providing additional options!
Just thinking that the top descending arc might better serve our message if it swooped up just past the sun...like a new morning start!
Yaaass!!
Can you do the tag line in the same font as restaurant, please? Also...while you're in there, possibly make a red version, too? Might do well with the sun!
Also...may be the font selection, but it looks complicated. Will probably be better on white, but possibly a non-italicized font for all words except "restart"?
Thank you for submitting your artwork to our contest, Gilang!
Like the cleanliness of it, but probably need more pop or interest. We probably want to emphasize restart more than restaurant.
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Met with my teammates and everyone is in agreement that the sunburst is not really representative of what we are trying the represent.
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We really still prefer this to the others you've submitted, but would like to see both sets of feedback addressed, please!
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Please let me know.
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Just thinking that the top descending arc might better serve our message if it swooped up just past the sun...like a new morning start!
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Can you do the tag line in the same font as restaurant, please? Also...while you're in there, possibly make a red version, too? Might do well with the sun!
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Hope You´re having a good day.
Many thanks for feedback, It's really helped me.
Ok, I'll revise now.
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Like the cleanliness of it, but probably need more pop or interest. We probably want to emphasize restart more than restaurant.