Revisiting with the team, they asked if you would be able to offer the lion on top of the stairs and not below. Perhaps reference more that the lion completed the action steps and is proudly positioned on top (please see reference of lion’s positioning). Our team appreciates your willingness and efforts if these changes would be something you would consider. Thank you so much.
Thank you for your feedback on the logo design. I have made the revisions you requested updated the design for your review. I hope you are satisfied with the changes and that the logo meets your expectations. Please let me know if you have any further comments or suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Hello, Thank you for your changes and other versions as we go through this creative process. I appreciate the fact that you changed the lions paws to be even on the base of the pyramid as well as the word RESPONSIBILITY to be not as wrapped. Would you be able to replace the horizon (sun) image from #59 as it allows the lion's image to pop and stand out more. I find the horizon (sun) on #70 is visually competing with all of the textures and lines of pyramid as well as the beautiful lion's image. The changes I would like to see pertaining to the horizon (sun) image on #59 would be to complete the bottom portion of the horizon (sun) evenly spaced, clean, and finished. I do appreciate the changes on the pyramid not looking distressed. Also, the word EMPOWERMENT seems to be placed differently in image #70 than the image #59. How the word is placed and the poking through of the bottom of the pyramid from both #59 and #70, regarding the in between spaces of the letters, appear different, are changed and are not consistent. Perhaps the word EMPOWERMENT can be cleanly and evenly placed on the bottom or incorporated into the bottom, but I would like it to look consistent, even and still stand out. When it is blended into the bottom of the pyramid, the lines of the pyramid appearing within the word (letters) itself, such as one example of the little piece on the bottom of the left part of the pyramid where the E in Empowerment is, makes it look a bit jagged on image #70 and on image #59 entirely different. I do understand that the E is poking into the pyramid on #70 due to its position, however, I would prefer it to not be so. Also, when placing the lion within the horizon (sun) (referencing the preferred image of sun (horizon) of #59), I am particular about the negative space to be even when editing around the lion's body, especially around his mane. I would prefer it to be clean and even on both sides. I really appreciate your time, patience, and greatest efforts. Thank you so much.
Hi NZR,
I am drawn to this design. May I ask if you could replace the word RESPONSIBILITY with the less arched version of #62. I do not like the text wrapped so closely around the circle.
Also, the bottom lines of the sun rays look jagged and unfinished. Can you make the angled bottom edges clean and symmetrical.Also, can you fill in the distressed look of the stairs? I prefer them solid.
Also, can the paws of the lion be even on the bottom step? I really appreciate all of your hard work. Thank You!
I like the realism of the lion, but would you be able to have him coming directly at the viewer and includes pyramid-type stairs like the photo I just uploaded?
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I am drawn to this design. May I ask if you could replace the word RESPONSIBILITY with the less arched version of #62. I do not like the text wrapped so closely around the circle.
Also, the bottom lines of the sun rays look jagged and unfinished. Can you make the angled bottom edges clean and symmetrical.Also, can you fill in the distressed look of the stairs? I prefer them solid.
Also, can the paws of the lion be even on the bottom step? I really appreciate all of your hard work. Thank You!
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