I like the fonts you used on Renu on this one and on #95. I'm trying to decide which one I like better. Let's undo the box around "Exterior Cleaning Services" and make it look like #90. Also, can you take a look at the spacing for RENU (make it more like #95? Thank you!
I think we’re getting very close with this one. The spacing of the gap between the roofline and the cityscape seems to be inconsistent. Can you take a look at that?
Maybe the roof just needs to be all blue or all green so that the front sight lines aren’t so prominent? I like the blue gun and hose in this version, so if it’s an all green roof, maybe there could be a gap between the hose and the roofline, like number 44, but the ends of the hose be angles to be parallel to the roofline? I’ll do a markup on submission 44 to try to explain.
In submission number 14 by Giza, it has an almost identical roof, but that house has a chimney. Would you be able to add something similar? It seems to help make the roofline not look like cat ears. Let me know if that’s possible. I really appreciate all your help.
Maybe one more version with the entire roofline shifted to the left and the cityscape to the right. We love the logo. The one thing we’re trying to change is that the roofline somewhat looks like cat ears, so we’re hoping that adding the cityscape back in will help with that.
I like this a lot! Good job! Could you add the cityscape back in like it #33? Maybe two versions, one version with it centered and one with it offset to the right? You can probably leave the outline like in 33 and have the building “floating” in the background, if that makes sense. In other words, leave the gap between the roofline and the cityscape.
I like the roofline. Can you make it smaller, probably the middle between this and #33. Also, can you make the hose run into the roofline like you did on #33. Also, would it be possible to add “RESIDENTIAL & COMMERCIAL” under PRO WASH?
I would be interested to see this with a larger roof, or a roof with multiple peaks (probably just 2 peaks?), and a smaller or different commercial skyline. Or even with a double peaked roof and no commercial.
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Can you put the “EXTERIOR CLEANING SERVICES” line in a box and make the text white?
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