I was unable to complete a more detailed landscape Bern from photo's, there is a small issue if i create an exact perspective will be accused of image tracing.
this time I send a new concept in three main buildings, until I can make a landscape full of Bern.
I uploaded for you a new pic which i tried to create the way we like it (Logo_18.Juni_V1.jpg)
So, there are just a few things left Checkliste - Font: Verdana - "Renovation" = red, rest black - keep the line below the name, it's very nice - this link will maybe help you for the buildings: http://www.summerbeach.ch/ - the border of the pics have to be "cut"
could you send it to me in .jpg , (entery no. 9) then i will do some correcions and can send it back to you for the last corrective actions. mail: yannick.hediger@gmail.com
- need it in good quality (for Poster / Banner --> vector graphic) - keep the city "smaller", not so high (logo also for print (letter, bill ect.) - do the changes i did in the pic
Sorry, I regret not having been able to, action is only allowed only for contest winners and we were not allowed to touch the outside of the site before contest ended or completed. :(
We are on the richt way. now it just looks to stretched. from left 2 right.
- 1. Buidling is in #12 very nice! - between the 3 buildingds it have to be "flat", like in #11 - Buidling in Middle have to be centred. keep it like in #9, just kick the semicircles at the bottom. - the building on the right i don't like that way, try it like in this pic (less white part and flip it plz.) http://www.swissworld.org/fileadmin/user_upload/swisspics/swisspic20040322_4809963_2.jpg - Text ist good, just dont stretch it. - "GmbH" have to be right-adjusted, but closer to "Bern"
-highest building ist the rightest one, then the left and after the middle one. (on #11 its ok) - building in the middle looks now very nice. just keep sure that there on both sides same number of windows (in the middle it look that there is 1 window more on the right)
- the buidling on the right (Münster), there is a roof at the left side, try to include it somehow (like in #11) - between building 1 and 2 it looks confusing, try it like #11 - right building @ his right side. in the middle is a steel stage. cut it below a litle bit and continue with the black zone little more left (difficult 2 discribe, look in pic #11 right side)
just ask when you have question, we are on the right way!
The "Zytgloggen-Tower" (left)... PERFECT, FANTASTIC!!!! looks very very nice!
The one in the middle looks nice, little bit spacy but nice.. will get you some inputs later.
the right building I still don't like. The problem I still have is, that i can^t recognice the subject (Tower "Münster). The connection with tho roof is very well done, bot the top of the tower is not good jet. plz look again in #11.
Thank you, we are very close now!
Greets, Yannick
ps: for the "münster-building", plz look also on google. or:
I think it's ok without the mountain, dont have a one recognable around the city. #29 is our favorite!!!! the only thing you should change, is the window of the Building on the right side. ( plz. do it like in #28). the rest is very good now!
It would be nice when you could do in addition a logo like #16. thisone we want to use for the letters
yes, of course you will get all of these concepts when the contest ends. now I'm working on the design window number 29, for a moment upload to the contest.
Very nice, very nice. think the logo is now finish. just get sure that the building in the middle (middle tower) don't look cutted off rest is very very nice!
If possible, plz. do for me #43 also from left to right, so we could use this for letters. (buidings on top of "renovation".
Hellou, Yes, I did a review of each part, all were reconfigure according to your requirement, and, also checked current composition of each building. When you need to correction, adjustment, I am very happy to do so.
I really appreciate that you took so much time in contest. and I feel I could learn a great deal from you and would certainly enjoy working with you you are very polite, and have great directions in your contest.
I also liked to work with you together and I woun't let win a other one !!!! because you did all the basic work, und we (i think so) had a polite and nice work together!! I can't let win a other one, cause if i did i would have a very bad feeling. Good work have to be payed, and you did a greate job! it's not fair that someone else copy your stile and all your work in a few minutes.
But finaly i have to say, version of green is also very nice. plz draw the line & change the style of the name like he did (now or after the cont.)
Was nice to work with you! (and congratulations! :o) If possible i would like to work with you in the future (can we interchange our datas after contest..?)
yes, I will make revisions when I arrived at the hotel, 1-2 hours in judging time. and after the contest officially ended we can communicate via email to meet whatever you need from me and also my revision round still open every time you need it.
what other designers are happen in dynamic contests, and indeed many of the designers who waited until the end of the contest to keep things easier have copied ranked work and win without pride. :)