#31, #29 and #30 - I like the concept of incorporating it almost as a flower, which is well targeted to my niche. I feel it is a little too simple and difficult to see from far away. Well chosen font and sizing, but the picture is too disconnected from the writing. Your colour choices in #31 and 30 are really good and very visually appealing!
#69 and #71 (, #31, #70 & #68) - Hey Kent! I like these two the best out of all the similar samples you've sent over. I appreciate the variety because it lets me really focus on what details I like and dislike. I have to say that I like the bigger pic and I LOVE the colours of the turquoise/teal one. I would like to see the image come out of the box a bit more; literally and figuratively. I'm intrigued by what you have going on inside the box and I'd like to see you expand it to flow more with the text. Maybe even sweeping around the 'R' like a flower? Or halfway or something like that - whatever looks good to your artist's eye. I'm just a layman, and I don't want to overwhelm the text, so if it won't work, please just say so. Also, is there any way to incorporate another colour into the design without killing the concept? I love colour! Also maybe colour the "health & wellness"? I feel like the text and the pic are too distinct at the moment. Feel free to be creative! Thanks!! :)
I would encourage you to push it more outside the lines, but equally. I think making it more of a flower-like symbol but holding the original overlapping and shadowy lines would be really pretty. This may even involve getting rid of the box entirely or changing it's shape to be more organic so you can hold the colour difference. Be creative and unstructured - run with it! You have a great idea here!
#93 - Kent - I'm really liking where you're going with this! I wish I had more artist expertise to be able to help you move towards exactly what I'm looking for...I feel like you're so close, but I don't know what to suggest exactly. I think I want the pic to be a bit fuller downwards and the blue strips just a bit shorter (more compact design). I would also like the second colour to be a bit brighter and maybe a different colour (although I can see why you did the subtle look - and maybe my idea is wrong). I love how it's like a flower and wings - very ethereal and pretty! You're totally on the right track - do keep brain storming!! I hope you had a good time with your wife and baby! :)
#106 & #107 - Kent - I'm sure she is! I am loving where your brainstorming took you! I really like both directions you went! My only notes are about the colours. The burnt orange makes one think of autumn and later life - I need fresh colours that make you think of spring and renewal. The beige and the lighter greens don't have quite the punch I would like to see. Other than that, I LOVE the "petals" and "peacock fan" that you came up with! I'm wondering if you could make the text slightly more teal (just a tiny bit)? I would also like "Health & Wellness" to have more pop at the bottom. Awesome Kent!!
#117 & #116 - I really like these! I'm sill concerned about the yellow being too pale. I really want people to be able to read the "health & wellness" from afar. Is there any other colour that would work in these? I'm a huge fan of purple and teal together, but I don't know if that would be overwhelming in this - I can see why you went pale. Other colours I'm a huge fan of are green, and blue. If you think of a colour that would work well and have the punch I need - feel free to go with it!
# 116 - I think I like the multiple colours in 107 better than just the yellow, but maybe it's just because it's yellow. I would love to see the green, purple and teal in it, or just one of those if that's better.
Could you give me a few options for different colours in these so I can see the variety? When you get a minute.... Family first!! :)
#122 - I'm liking the purple with the teal! I think I would like to invert it though so the purple is the bottom colour and the bright blue is still the top one.
I'm so torn between most of these new ones!! I like bits of each of them. I really think we're on to something here. I would love to see some other colour ideas too - feel free to be creative! I think I'm liking the "peacock" one best - so you can stick to that one and not have to do 2x the work ;)
Thank you!!! Can you try one with a purpley blue, through teal through a bright blue like the one in the yellow-blue gradient? I think I like the writing in teal as well (it's my favourite colour). These are so great!
#132 - can I also see this one with the dark purple text on both lines and one w dark purple text above and teal below? Thank you Kent!! This is so great!!