Hi - we'd like to avoid the use of a star. Your design is very strong, which is in line with the profile I created. However, I'd like to see if you can pull that back a bit and come from a more feminine, fluid. swirly design. We're liking some of the designs which have brought this into play. I like the font, to be sure, but curious if you have any other ideas, perhaps softer. I don't mean to contradict the profile, it's just a feeling we're having as we look at the designs. We're feeling the need to reflect movement in the reaching higher tag line which is why we like the idea of movement from the lower left to the upper right hand. Strong - yes - but on the softer side of things.
Have I completely confused you??