how about if you push the orange dots around a bit more in the clockwise direction so the largest blue and yellow dots are adjacent and aligned with the top of the r?
please could we see what happens with the icon when you send the orange dots in the opposite direction with the last dot also aligned to the top of the r
You were right about the last blue circle, it was a bit off the circle so I corrected its position and made it slightly smaller.
Regarding the placement of the graphic, I moved it two clicks to the right so that the space between it and the r and the space between e&g are equal.
Personally I find it very nice, what do you think?
please can you also double check that the dots in the icon are still within the circle as it feels like it's becoming elliptical (could be an illusion but it feels like the last blue dot is pulling to the right - this might change when the its pulled up to align to the top of the r)
having seen this it feels better with the last blue dot aligned to the top of the r
the last orange dot is fine where it is as is the big yellow dot!
i was thinking that the icon could sit a bit closer to the text almost as if it was an extension of the text so the kerning/spacing between the letters has some balance with the icon - either same spacing or doubled - if it's too close it may look weird so i'm just wondering whether the space between the icon and the beginning of the text is optimal, i'd be interested in your thoughts on this
Here you go, I made all the adjustments that you mentioned.
I am not quite sure what do you mean with "adjust slightly the position of the overall graphic so that it's spaced to feel as if it's a continuation of the text". Can you explain it a bit more please? Thank you!
please can I see a version where the last blue dot is aligned to the central line through the text (or horizontal line of the e)along with the central yellow dot
and the last orange dot aligned to the bottom of the r (if this doesn't work we may change this to align with the bottom of the g but let's see what happens!)
we might then also adjust slightly the position of the overall graphic so that it's spaced to feel as if it's a continuation of the text ;)
This is the adjusted version.
I made the icon a bit smaller in order to balance it with the text and rotated it slightly.
The yellow dot has the same size as the negative space of o-a-g letters.
What do you think?
I wonder if you're coming from the creative field because you're having a sharp eye :)
Please check #481, #480 revisions.
I think I like better this new colour combination.
As you'll see in both cases I've aligned the yellow circle with the text.
In #481 I've corrected the spacing of the text and in #480 I've used the Eurostile typeface, bold & regular.
Let me know what you think.
Thank you
now let's make some refinements and develop your creation
a couple of things we're interested to see
the graphic
can you do a version where the green dot is yellow as if it were the sun and the blue and orange dots are gradiented so they appear to be emerging from the centre - this might not work but we're trying to get a bit more energy in this graphic
can we get the green dot to align along the centre line of the text whilst maintaining alignment of the other dots? at the moment the green dot is a little high so it feels slightly imbalanced and disconnected from the text.
please experiment with positioning of the graphic in relation top the text.
the text
please can we see an alternative typeface such as eurostile or ddt (by typodermic/ray larabie)?
please would you do a version that switches the green & red in the graphic, i.e. so what's green becomes red and the single red circle becomes green :)
Could we see this in some other — and perhaps simpler colour combinations? And perhaps with some differing rotations of the balls? One thing we note is that the two last green balls seem to be the same size, and are not quite on the same 'orbit.' Could you refine the balls and orbits a bit? We like the idea of energy and acceleration that we see here…
thanks for your work so far, your submissions are promising - we would now like you to love the type and see if you can make it pop a bit more for us - for example, try looking at the work of designers such as Paul Rand and his innovations with type - please don’t feel offended by this request we just want to go from good to terrific
Could you play with the colours here a bit? RGB would mirror the colors of light, for example, and we think the dot in the middle is interesting. We'd love to see a few more variations
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i think #488 - the one currently ranked 1st is the one
is there anything else you would like to do to improve on or finalise #488?
I had to move the yellow dot slightly downwards, otherwise it would be too close with the orange last dot...
how about if you push the orange dots around a bit more in the clockwise direction so the largest blue and yellow dots are adjacent and aligned with the top of the r?
nearly there! :)
Here is the version that you asked.
Maybe #488 looks more balanced, what do you think?
At the moment I am out for shopping but I’ll be back in less than an hour to make those changes
Thank you!
i hope you had a good evening :)
i would like to try one more thing here
please could we see what happens with the icon when you send the orange dots in the opposite direction with the last dot also aligned to the top of the r
it may not work out but i think it's worth a try
thanks in advance :)
let me sit with this for the evening and come back tomorrow but I think we are there
have a great evening!
Regarding the placement of the graphic, I moved it two clicks to the right so that the space between it and the r and the space between e&g are equal.
Personally I find it very nice, what do you think?
thanks! :)
having seen this it feels better with the last blue dot aligned to the top of the r
the last orange dot is fine where it is as is the big yellow dot!
i was thinking that the icon could sit a bit closer to the text almost as if it was an extension of the text so the kerning/spacing between the letters has some balance with the icon - either same spacing or doubled - if it's too close it may look weird so i'm just wondering whether the space between the icon and the beginning of the text is optimal, i'd be interested in your thoughts on this
I am not quite sure what do you mean with "adjust slightly the position of the overall graphic so that it's spaced to feel as if it's a continuation of the text". Can you explain it a bit more please? Thank you!
thanks
please can I see a version where the last blue dot is aligned to the central line through the text (or horizontal line of the e)along with the central yellow dot
and the last orange dot aligned to the bottom of the r (if this doesn't work we may change this to align with the bottom of the g but let's see what happens!)
we might then also adjust slightly the position of the overall graphic so that it's spaced to feel as if it's a continuation of the text ;)
I made the icon a bit smaller in order to balance it with the text and rotated it slightly.
The yellow dot has the same size as the negative space of o-a-g letters.
What do you think?
I wonder if you're coming from the creative field because you're having a sharp eye :)
the central yellow dot should be aligned along the centre line and be sized to correspond with the white circle space in the g, a, g, o, a
hope that makes sense :)
please can you adjust the positioning of the graphic and the various dots to align with this typeface
#483 - silka font
#484 - basier font
#485 - greycliff font
Thank you!
Please could I see this in some different san serif faces?
For example, I'm interested in seeing:
• silka
• basier
• greycliff
thanks in advance for these revisions - getting the type just right will make this design look spectacular :)
The font that I've used in #481 is "Century Gothic".
i meant can I please see #480 with the graphic in same alignment as #481
what typeface are you using for #481?
can I please see #481 with the graphic in same alignment as #480
i'm going to consider some further san serif faces for comparison :)
I think I like better this new colour combination.
As you'll see in both cases I've aligned the yellow circle with the text.
In #481 I've corrected the spacing of the text and in #480 I've used the Eurostile typeface, bold & regular.
Let me know what you think.
Thank you
I’ll make some new versions according to your comments.
now let's make some refinements and develop your creation
a couple of things we're interested to see
the graphic
can you do a version where the green dot is yellow as if it were the sun and the blue and orange dots are gradiented so they appear to be emerging from the centre - this might not work but we're trying to get a bit more energy in this graphic
can we get the green dot to align along the centre line of the text whilst maintaining alignment of the other dots? at the moment the green dot is a little high so it feels slightly imbalanced and disconnected from the text.
please experiment with positioning of the graphic in relation top the text.
the text
please can we see an alternative typeface such as eurostile or ddt (by typodermic/ray larabie)?
please experiment with font weighting and kerning
many thanks!
Let me know if there's anything else I can do for you.
Would you like to make orange red, because you mentioned about red..?
For all the above I used the thicker font for "regenerative".
Thank you
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Would you like to use orange-green shades?
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thanks for your work so far, your submissions are promising - we would now like you to love the type and see if you can make it pop a bit more for us - for example, try looking at the work of designers such as Paul Rand and his innovations with type - please don’t feel offended by this request we just want to go from good to terrific
Let me know if you approve the thickness-kerning of "regenerative".
Thank you
please can you also do versions with adjusted kerning to give a little more spacing with the lettering
Thank you
Let me know if you want it heavier than that.
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Please check #415, #414 colour variations in green and orange.
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Here is a new design with RGB colours.
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It's late in my country, I am expecting your comments to work early tomorrow morning.
Many thanks
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I am at your disposal for any changes you might want.
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Let me know if you find any of them interesting.
Thank you :)
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i'm not feeling the graphic rg device here - sorry! :)
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Please check my concepts #127, #128.
Your feedback will be appreciated.
Thank you,
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