The crown looks good, but the shield around the mustache and beard doesn't quite fit yet. The mustache and beards don't fit flow together well. Thank you for the quick first attempt!
Entry #4, the beard is too wide and we didn't like the sharp angles of the beard and moustache in entry 3 & 4. We really liked the crown in entry #1 and #3. We would like to see if you could do more elaborate design with that crown without the cross in the crown.