Yes better, use #575 font and add it to this logo. Keep Redefine the green and the Fitness black. Change Fitness is Medicine to black but keep lines green
This is from a client. Just wanted your feedback. It's only 1 person so not the end of the world but, just curious your thoughts
I think you need to go back to graphic design team. The Es are too similar to energy fitness. You should have something that differentiates you all and something that’s a bit more identifiable and ownable. The “fitness is medicine” tagline is very difficult to read given how tracked out/spaced out the type is. It’s hard to read. And then there’s a disconnect between the barbell logo and the tagline, and the additional rules next to the tagline. There’s just too much going on. Truthfully, I would go back to your graphic designers and ask for different concepts. These are just variations of the same concept. You want something that you don’t have to redesign in a couple years again.
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Also wanted to know if I can get one with just the dumbbell being gold so I can use it for our exclusive elite clients
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Plus another one exactly like this, but take off last plate and show more of the bar at the ends
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I think you need to go back to graphic design team. The Es are too similar to energy fitness. You should have something that differentiates you all and something that’s a bit more identifiable and ownable. The “fitness is medicine” tagline is very difficult to read given how tracked out/spaced out the type is. It’s hard to read. And then there’s a disconnect between the barbell logo and the tagline, and the additional rules next to the tagline. There’s just too much going on. Truthfully, I would go back to your graphic designers and ask for different concepts. These are just variations of the same concept. You want something that you don’t have to redesign in a couple years again.
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Basically image that design as a stand alone so when you see it you mnow its hs
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after I read the design brief, I am interested in participating in this contest, I provide several design proposals for consideration, if you like the design proposal that I submitted give a rating and I'll send more interesting logo choices for your company, please check my profile and see the hundreds of designs that have been won, give feedback if you have suggestions so that the logo design matches what you are looking for.
Thank you
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Xero