Maybe you can use a V for the shape of the tail instead of an R. We decided against text and letters completely. We mainly want to incorporate the V of the airplanes tail and the Red Tips of the wings. Thank you!
That's better, but we are definitely looking for something more fluid and less rigid. Please see the current Top Ranked designs for examples of the direction we're leaning. The Contest brief will also help. Thank you!
The idea here is to combine both together I take into consideration the design how I interpret a brief then I look at the requirements for reproduction embroidery, print and vinyl graphics etc.
I'll see what i can do....
Thank you for the feedback and considering my work.
#63 was sitting right there in front of me and I did not realize it until today..as you can see I've done 2 different directions but it is not my vision for this project. #65 #66
There's no need to add red tips because we see the streak you placed across the V as already representing the 'Red Tip' (see the resemblance on Contest Brief image IMG_6001). So to us, it already exists!
Also on #63, we would like to see the V be thinner and more fluid paint brush strokes. Less bold.
And then maybe adding some subtle blue in there somehow.
Maybe we can try #84's swoosh on #77's V. And check out the uploaded picture, IMG_6735, and see if you can emulate the color scheme and design of the tip as it truly is on the actual plane.