How about to move the rabbit to the left to better occupy the space under that left roof? Space under the right roof might be useful for names or phone numbers or something? Otherwise #110 looks pretty darn good, and the color is great.
Oh, and also might I just be able to see it with the slogan back in but outside the outline? I was thinking some of my applications would have it in there and wonder that would still look like. Most of the time it will be without it, however. Thank you again!
This is closest to what I was trying to convey, but it looks different now to see it in person. Can we a) eliminate the slogan, b) have ALL the text inside the house outline? Beyond those two things, it looks really good! Thanks!
Crouching rabbit - excellent! Color switch - like it! So here are a couple tweaks: 1 - let's shrink the "Enterprises LLC" line a bit, just shorter, but same spacing; 2 - remove window and change to pointed roof; 3 - elongated the house and enlarge so that it encompasses the entire rabbit, though not the text. If you wouldn't mind, perhaps it's worth a look-see to try a version where the rabbit and text ARE both in front of the gray house? I also don't want to veer too much to the expected or ordinary. So I'm wanting to retain some uniqueness, too. Oh! One more thing... could I ask for a version of those that also include the slogan in small font somewhere? If below the "enterprises line, I think red would work and same font as "rabbit". What do you think? Thank you for the revision. :-)
The overall idea isn't bad, but the rabbit looks so much like it should be a deer. How about just have the rabbit in a stationary horizontal crouch position (still a silhouette) and the house in a half tone (larger too) behind it? "Red" has to be the word in red don't you think? Thank you for your submission!
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Let me know if you'd like revisions. I'd be happy to provide them. Thanks!
Pam