One of the survey voters had the suggestion to change the word "house" to "home" and I think that is a good idea. Can you tweak this one last thing? :-) (Who would have guessed there would - could - be so much tweaking?)
Real good. Can the line of the blue R extend all the way down and just be parallel to the line of the red R and both stop at the slant (without any horizontal "foot")? the left side is fine with the foot, but both lines of the roof should be blue, ok? Thank you!
Will I be able to get both of these files (#120 and #121) from you?
PS - They finally responded to my question, but it was only to say they are finding out the answer. Geez. :-)
I created a survey and have submitted a question twice for how to view the results, but no one answers. Do you know? Also, I was wanting to know if you can tweak this design one last time for me? Can you possibly reduce the thickness of the red R just a little so that it is the same proportion/ratio to the other letters as the blue one is? The only difference should be that it is a little larger. And lastly, can you take #89 and show me just the icon part without the words, and remove the portion with the words? One of my applications will be just the icon (house roof and red and blue Rs with the ears). Thank you.
Sorry. The Enterprises part is supposed to stay exactly the same as this, but the slogan (Good house. Good family. Good life.) Is what I am asking to see below the "enterprises llc" line. Don't change anything about what you have here, just add the slogan as one of my uses will be to have it there sometimes. Thanks.
This one looks so good! And I agree with you going back to red and blue underlines. The blue is much better as well. So if I wanted to add the slogan below the enterprises line, would you suggest using the red rabbit font and the color red? or what? Nice work!
This is great! Only one more thing... I think I'd like both roof lines blue (not red), though I do see why you switched the colors in the depiction below. I had wondered if it would a little simpler with just the one color on the roof, but now that the whole underline is red, I'm not so sure. Hmmm.
Basically, my request above takes version #58 below and slightly increases the size of the blue R and leaves the entire underline in red. I just need the size of the red R and house to be as proportionally larger as you show in #54 above. (I hope this makes sense to you.)
Request: Can you please show me this version but with a) the gray house line being blue, b) the capital blue R on rabbit being the same stylized R as the red one, a little larger and keep the entire underline all red. End result is the house/R being larger (just as you have it) than the text.Dot on the I doesn't matter for color. Thank you.
One last request: can you show me a different version of this (that would be in addition to it, not instead of it) with JUST the house and two Rs? I am not sure if two separate Rs would be best or possibly have the second R as a shadow to the first, enough so that people can tell there are two of them. I am wanting to see how JUST the icon part of the logo would look as a stand-alone. (which is to say leave out the whole "enterprises llc" part as well as the "ed" and "abbit".)
What a great idea on those Rs! And I like the dot over the I being red, as you have in #56 and #57 below. Can you tweak the blue so that is a little more navy blue (darker) ? That font change is also rather nice. :-) You have certainly pulled together some nice aspects. One little item that someone brought to my attention is that the line on the eaves of the roof on the left is the only gray thing left. I know from some calls I made before that to print three colors is more than two colors, as one would expect. What suggestions do you have for how to get rid of that third color since there is so little of it? Just make the line blue or red? Or eliminate the line? I'm not sure.
OK, so a number of people I showed this to assumed it was saying "ED RABBIT" instead of "Red Rabbit". That roof/R is what I liked about this approach, but is there anything we can do to make sure people know it is "RED" and not "ED"?
I did! Can you perhaps just tweak the enterprises line to be a little shorter/smaller still, and therefore the house and red R a little larger? Have the left hand horizontal line only extend for one letter's width. I love that you made the window black again on this one too. Looking really good! It is sooooooo close. :-) Thank you again! Nice!
1. Definitely leave the "ED" (of red) the color red.
2. Enterprises LLC can be smaller and stretched. It is not that important as the name and idea of house/home.
3. Roof and its R = larger compared to "edrabbit". (Take the sizes from #27 below and plug them in to this scheme (leaving off the first red R of course)
Looking good!
Initially, I didn't like this one too much, but as I studied it and realized the roof/rabbit profile is actually an "R" , I warmed up to it more and more. How about taking that whole stylized R/house roof thing and using that R to start the title line? (red) R then EDRABBITT above the line that extends to the right and enterprises llc below the line? same color scheme as you have, maybe black solid or outlined windows, but elongating the overall block of logo (line extending to the left can be shorter). Then I think you are on to something. Thanks!
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Would you please include the files of the logo rendering as well?
It was a pleasure working with you. Good luck on future contests, fortuno!
May I know your email address to send my revision?
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I already upload new revision for design #121
If you need anything else please let me know.
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Will I be able to get both of these files (#120 and #121) from you?
PS - They finally responded to my question, but it was only to say they are finding out the answer. Geez. :-)
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Any news from this contest?
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If you need another revision please feel free to let me know.
Thanks.
Regards,
fortuno
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Thanks for your feedback.
Did you mean like this one? If you need another revision please let me know.
Best Regards,
fortuno
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2. Enterprises LLC can be smaller and stretched. It is not that important as the name and idea of house/home.
3. Roof and its R = larger compared to "edrabbit". (Take the sizes from #27 below and plug them in to this scheme (leaving off the first red R of course)
Looking good!
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Thank you for your feedback.
Did you mean like this one? If you need another revision feel free to let me know.
Best,
fortuno
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