Love the direction you're going with #79! Do you think you could turn the black, negative space into a black crow, or perhaps 2 black crows? I want it to read a bit more like multiple birds.
I'm not a fan of the font - maybe try a more handwritten look? This type of design lends itself well to a horizontal positioning for the text as well- would you mind trying it to the right of the image? Additionally, you could try to incorporate the words in the graphic itself by making the red or black areas a bit more spacious (vertically).
Very cool though! Thanks so much for participating!
Hey Satto, That's a bit of a step in the wrong direction I think, getting a bit too abstract - I still prefer #79. I added a couple of images to the brief, which might help.
Also, the Black Crab (bold/clear) and Wendel design (sketchy but modern) logo's you've made are nice - maybe you could use those for reference on your next attempt?
Hello again, Apologies for saying this again- but #79 is still my favorite. #85 is a nice new direction, but it's very heavy. Also, the black crows in it are too subtle. It's important to that the birds aren't all the same shape, and that there is some unique element to each crow, especially the red crow. Don't feel like you need to incorporate the slogan either, it's just a statement I provided to help people understand the company vision.
#94 is simple. This is what I like about it, but generally speech bubbles without something "saying" the word doesn't work for me.
Could you try to make #79 more circular or square? perhaps even add some depth to it by placing it on an angle and beside the text? Additionally, if the bird could look a bit happier that would be excellent!
The teeth on the crow is a bit terrifying, I think we can avoid that. Also, changing the bird itself in the rectangle shapes has made it less cute/fun. Your first submission is still one of my ranked logos. I think we may have exhausted most of the ideas on this one - unless you have some other directions to go.
#360 is cool, I like that it's linear. The additional of the black crow shapes in #369 and #369 is interesting - it probably makes most sense to have it aligned like the #360. You could try one without the open mouth crow too.
#392 and #394 are nice and simple, but they don't balance correctly with the words. Can you play around with the facing direction? Maybe upward or downward? Perhaps adding the shape to the word itself? I'm not sure where to go to fix the balance issue at a glance.