Recreation SpacesLogo Design Contest

revision
make it little bit change on layout and more realistic park
what do you thing?
any other suggestion?

best rgd, mbahdjoyo

please check my entry #130

please check my entry #103

revision
more realistic.
what do you thing?


best rgd, mbahdjoyo

Can you do the overall design style how you did with Southeast Camping. Where it looks real and has that type of design to it. I like the concept and the overall layout but the way it shows needs that type of look. In your design for Southeasst Camping in the middle circle that type of look for the balls, field goal. Please thank you

Nice job. Looks good.

done
you can check on entry #93

alternative layout.
more clear with your services, simplify and bold
what do you thing?

best rgd, mbahdjoyo

Yes.

1, The basketball with the shading and stars I don't know if I like.

2, The shading on the Recreation Spaces makes it look a little dull or busy don't know how to explain. The font and color doesn't pop and from a far ways ways gets lost in the overall design.

3. Dont know if pickle ball will be best to have as a ball people don't reference that other than a white ball with some black dots. Dont know what to replace it with but please do not put soccer ball.

4. Yes courts are our main building item whether basketball/tennis
5. the slogan should read We Build Fun
6. Change background to white.

Thank you Thank you!!!

let me clear the direction first my friend.
1. you want alternative basketball?
2. you want me to remove the shading behind the RECREATION SPACE and make alternative font
3. and about the white ball it reference of your pickleballs
4. put some symbol that reference to tennis and basketball courts
5. change the slogan
6. change the background to white
am I correct? anything that I miss?

best rgd, mbahdjoyo

Also can we change the background to white? Thanks

Also just had a meeting and have decided to have slogan read:
We Build Fun

and Not

We Build The Fun

or maybe where the white dot is on the bottom make that a baseball with the redstiching?

also the white dot at the bottom needs to be changes to a baseball homeplate and not a white dot.
and the golf ball on the tee is hard to recognize can we make that look differently

Also can we add a court basketball or tennis. We build primarily courts basketball and tennis I think that should somehow be represented. I like the ball concept but the white one dont know what that represents/ Possibly a golf ball? Cant really tell.

Like this. A couple of changes.

1. Don't care for the way the basketball looks.
2. The shading in the logo not sold on
3. The Font and colors of Recreation Space don't care for.
Sorry for being so picky I wish I knew what I want but every change makes me like certain things and want to change other items. Thanks for all work

thanks for like it my designs
please check my alternative entry on #60

alternative
I made some ornament to give information about your service, still in bold and simple concept. I dont want your logo look to busy.
what do you thing?

best rgd, mbahdjoyo

We love your work. We seen your other designs and do like the one presented just not thrilled with it. We are looking for an overall shape of a baseball diamond representing the baseball fields we build.
Incorporating a basketball goal into the design some how. A tennis court. A golf putting green or golf on a tee somehow in it. The font and the shading need to be different. Just would love to see you try again. Because of the other designs in other contest you’ve done are amazing thanks

hi we back in track?
how about your meeting team?

best rgd, mbahdjoyo

After a meeting with our team it will not be sufficient. We are looking for a design much like our inspiration design choices. I dont know what that type of look is but one that is almost drawn like those. Keep trying thanks

revision
-font alternative (more clear, bold and in one type font)
what do you thing?

best rgd, mbahdjoyo

thanks for your feedback.
please check my revision on entry #12

Looks great. Changes Would be text font needs to be something cleaner and show Recreation Spaces is the name of the company so would make those the same font. But maybe different colors. I like the logo in general but maybe a
few changes. Don't know how to explain maybe so more attempts would be great. Thanks

Hi Recspaces
any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.

best rgd, mbahdjoyo