Thanks! Was not clear enough...sorry. Would like to actual font to be closer together..not just the thickness of the same font. Make sense? Maybe a different font for BODY that is skinnier? Hard to describe on here! :) Also aqua and bright orange with a little grey are the brand colors.
Like the idea of #42, making the O look smaller or like lost weight, but looks weird to me. Can you make the entire BODY text look like it has "lost weight" ? :)
really sorry for withdrawing entry #167 http://c24708.r8.cf1.rackcdn.com/728151626597-223.png other designer claimed cutting on Y's arm treatment. i just uploaded other variations. Please feel free to ask if you need to see other variations, Thankyou :)