too much red on red. the guy is too small. I'm not digging the "design" of the name "Realtor Ron" part. just don't like the flow of it. Here are a couple of links with signs where I like the design or layout.
And by the way if you have a vector format of the KW logo that I can use in this send me a private message so I can give you a good email addy for you to send the file(s) (don't want to post email in plaintext for security reasons)
Background is fine for now Live in Phoenix, AZ Let's come up with a few variations of the Name and slogan. I'm thinking the font needs to be more remarkable. We need to do something with all of the white space at the top. Keller Williams’s logo gets lost somewhat. Independently owned and operated should be changed to "An Independent Member Broker" and be moved to below the KW logo
I think that it gets lost on the website, but without a white background, that white strip at the top with KW realty will look really good, thats how the signs from that website are set up. If its standing alone the white is a really nice contrasting element, and theres not too much emphasis on KW.
I'll try out some new fonts and layout changes later this afternoon.
ok so keep the franchise slogan on the bottom. Maybe make the KW logo about 10% bigger. not much just a bit. let's take out "because I've been there" that's more for direct mail. i'll wait to see what changes are made for the name and slogan.
I can add some stars and stuff if you would like and make the sky resemble night a little better, but I know that you weren't too thrilled with the sunset idea from the previous contest so I didn't take the time to draw any constellations..
Here is a higher resolution version of the character for you to check out and let me know what else you would like me to work on, I changed the eyes a little bit so let me know if you would like me to make these changes on the actual designs.
looks the same to me but I'm sure that's just my comuter. Can we try some changes with the guy. Maybe have him giving a thumbs up or the peice sign or something else creative.
alot of the detail gets lost in the resize down to 350px wide, I have been working on this at full size with a ron that can be blown up to 2 feet tall w/o looking bad.