Again top marks for nailing the era, and we love the boldness and simplicity of this one. We understand the choice of green for the healthy aspect, but it loses it's vibrant energy, looks a bit flat. We would love a variation of this if possible that brings the potential of this logo to life:
- rather than a perfect round button, how about slightly imperfect? A little unsymmetrical and or wavy background, maybe looking a little like a puddle?
- this idea might be too hard basket, but I wonder what some water condensation / droplets might look like. Feel free to ignore this suggestion, was thinking it may give an element of freshness, but then again simplicity is also important
- love the subtle hint of health with the 3 leaves. Maybe we could try subtly putting in a couple of ingredients or items that we are selling? Some items we will be selling are real fruit ice creams in waffle cones, real fruit smoothies, and milkshakes, cookie, cupcakes. Often fruit ingredients; strawberry or mixed berry (raspberry, blueberry, blackberry)
- and lastly the colour, what about a red/orange background? Red with white letters? Orange with white letters? Yellow or golden yellow background with white or red letters?
This is well done, and thanks for your submission. Definitely reminds us of the golden 50's/60's era, and the orange and green are natural healthy colours and popular during the 70's. So you've nailed the era we are after, well done. I wonder if you could please try a variation for us:
- keeping this colour scheme
- more legible from a distance (eg stand away from your screen), maybe a thinner circle?
- circle in red? yellow?
- what would a bolder circle look like?
We look forward to your variation. Thanks!
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- rather than a perfect round button, how about slightly imperfect? A little unsymmetrical and or wavy background, maybe looking a little like a puddle?
- this idea might be too hard basket, but I wonder what some water condensation / droplets might look like. Feel free to ignore this suggestion, was thinking it may give an element of freshness, but then again simplicity is also important
- love the subtle hint of health with the 3 leaves. Maybe we could try subtly putting in a couple of ingredients or items that we are selling? Some items we will be selling are real fruit ice creams in waffle cones, real fruit smoothies, and milkshakes, cookie, cupcakes. Often fruit ingredients; strawberry or mixed berry (raspberry, blueberry, blackberry)
- and lastly the colour, what about a red/orange background? Red with white letters? Orange with white letters? Yellow or golden yellow background with white or red letters?
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- keeping this colour scheme
- more legible from a distance (eg stand away from your screen), maybe a thinner circle?
- circle in red? yellow?
- what would a bolder circle look like?
We look forward to your variation. Thanks!
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Here's my submissions #1, #2, #3, #4, #5, #6, #7 and #8.
Please feel free and please let me know if you'd like to see any revisions.
Thank you.
Best regards,
Zyraco