Hi Raymer,
You're fast! We like this version of all of them. We still like the color contrast and the italics on top make it more dynamic. One person commented they felt the sun's rays look too much like a financial services company. Maybe it is that particular type of ray? Is there another way to express the sun?
So helpful to see all these options. Thanks for your quick and impressive response. Can we see these colors with the 'Recover' non-italicized? Can we also see the yellow version like that as well? Can we also see versions with the font size of 'Recover' matching 'Ready Set'? We're asking b/c the 'Recover' aspect of what we do is just as important as the 'Ready' and 'Set' features.
Hi Raymer,
We like this one the best of the versions you sent over. The yellow colors tie things together nicely. The lack of the circle on the sun doesn't make it feel 'God-ish'. Would like to see it with the 'Recover' in italics. Would like to see it with the 'Ready Set' in italics. Would like to see it the 'Ready Set' in a different color (even though I think it is nice how the colors are balancing each other right now).
Hi Raymer,
We kept you as a finalist b/c you do some inspired work, and want to give you the opportunity to do something amazing. We'd like to see a mountain with a path or trail leading up to it. Something bold and graphic. Think you can do that?
Hi Raymer,
This is nice, and we like the use of negative space and how it creates that shape between the hands and the heart. We just are trying to make our company less about 'compassion' and more about positive energy and improvement. We checked out your portfolio and you do some really inspired work, so please keep sending us ideas. We'd love to work with you!
Hi Raymer,
We showed the hearts to people and they thought it reminded them of a dating site. :( We also discussed, and the position we want people to think of us as is a life coach, not a friend. So hearts are probably to warm and fuzzy. Can you take it in a different direction?
Hi Raymer,
We showed the hearts to people and they thought it reminded them of a dating site. :( We also discussed, and the position we want people to think of us as is a life coach, not a friend. So hearts are probably to warm and fuzzy. Can you take it in a different direction?
Hi Raymer,
We showed the hearts to people and they thought it reminded them of a dating site. :( We also discussed, and the position we want people to think of us as is a life coach, not a friend. So hearts are probably to warm and fuzzy. Can you take it in a different direction?
Hi Raymer,
We showed the hearts to people and they thought it reminded them of a dating site. :( We also discussed, and the position we want people to think of us as is a life coach, not a friend. So hearts are probably to warm and fuzzy. Can you take it in a different direction?
Hi Raymer,
We showed the hearts to people and they thought it reminded them of a dating site. :( We also discussed, and the position we want people to think of us as is a life coach, not a friend. So hearts are probably to warm and fuzzy. Can you take it in a different direction?
Hi Raymer. This one is the best of the bunch so far. There's a feeling of positivity with the heart. The hearts are full, rather than empty. The words feel strong and substantial and the Recovery piece feels big. Thank you. Here's what we'd like to see - we want the font(s) to be something different. Something with more style and action. Make it dynamic. Along those lines, we came up with the idea of the three words being red, yellow and green respectively to convey Stop, Yield and GO! The font colors you have seem derivative of what we've used, so you can play around with that more. Also, any depth or texture would be a plus.
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You're fast! We like this version of all of them. We still like the color contrast and the italics on top make it more dynamic. One person commented they felt the sun's rays look too much like a financial services company. Maybe it is that particular type of ray? Is there another way to express the sun?
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We like this one the best of the versions you sent over. The yellow colors tie things together nicely. The lack of the circle on the sun doesn't make it feel 'God-ish'. Would like to see it with the 'Recover' in italics. Would like to see it with the 'Ready Set' in italics. Would like to see it the 'Ready Set' in a different color (even though I think it is nice how the colors are balancing each other right now).
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We kept you as a finalist b/c you do some inspired work, and want to give you the opportunity to do something amazing. We'd like to see a mountain with a path or trail leading up to it. Something bold and graphic. Think you can do that?
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This is nice, and we like the use of negative space and how it creates that shape between the hands and the heart. We just are trying to make our company less about 'compassion' and more about positive energy and improvement. We checked out your portfolio and you do some really inspired work, so please keep sending us ideas. We'd love to work with you!
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We showed the hearts to people and they thought it reminded them of a dating site. :( We also discussed, and the position we want people to think of us as is a life coach, not a friend. So hearts are probably to warm and fuzzy. Can you take it in a different direction?
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We showed the hearts to people and they thought it reminded them of a dating site. :( We also discussed, and the position we want people to think of us as is a life coach, not a friend. So hearts are probably to warm and fuzzy. Can you take it in a different direction?
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We showed the hearts to people and they thought it reminded them of a dating site. :( We also discussed, and the position we want people to think of us as is a life coach, not a friend. So hearts are probably to warm and fuzzy. Can you take it in a different direction?
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We showed the hearts to people and they thought it reminded them of a dating site. :( We also discussed, and the position we want people to think of us as is a life coach, not a friend. So hearts are probably to warm and fuzzy. Can you take it in a different direction?
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We showed the hearts to people and they thought it reminded them of a dating site. :( We also discussed, and the position we want people to think of us as is a life coach, not a friend. So hearts are probably to warm and fuzzy. Can you take it in a different direction?
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