entry #6 is getting closer to what i am looking for.
again - keeping close to the uploads is what im looking for unless you have something unique and creative in another direction. im looking for the bird to be more mean looking and more "stylized" like the uploads. im also big on typography so really work that part of the logo too.
and for now just keep the logo black and white. not too worried about color.
1) the beak is too "smooth" - check out the raven software logo i uploaded and its not "jaggy", but its more pronounced where it changes direction...do you know what i mean?
2) if the eye/he could look even a little meaner
3) i like how you added more wing. could you make it look more like a "bicep" like hes a big ass strong birs and put less white in it. i find my eye being drawn to that top part of the wing that has more white accent in it then the rest of the bird.