RAVEN Self Defense & FitnessLogo Design Contest

Logo Design Contest
Contests / RAVEN Self Defense & Fitness

RAVEN Self Defense & Fitness has selected their winning logo design.

For $350 they received 72 designs from 13 different designers from around the world.

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#18

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#17

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#9

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#10

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#34

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#6

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#7

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#5

Discussion

 
Logo Designer
here is my entry, I hope you like it.
I will submit another 2 variants

(This comment references Entry #5)
14 years ago
 
Logo Designer
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(This comment references Entry #6)
14 years ago
 
Logo Designer
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(This comment references Entry #7)
14 years ago
 
Client
entry #6 is getting closer to what i am looking for.

again - keeping close to the uploads is what im looking for unless you have something unique and creative in another direction. im looking for the bird to be more mean looking and more "stylized" like the uploads. im also big on typography so really work that part of the logo too.

and for now just keep the logo black and white. not too worried about color.

14 years ago
 
Logo Designer
Thank you for the feedback. Here is the revised raven, and 2 type fonts.

(This comment references Entry #9)
14 years ago
 
Logo Designer
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(This comment references Entry #10)
14 years ago
 
Client
i like entry #9 the most so far. nice job. if you can there are some tweaks id like to see...

1) in between Haganah and Muay Thai put a dot/slash to separate instead of a comma.

2) can i see a variation with the beak closed and make the beak a little more robust.

3) make his arm/wing look bigger and go across the whole square almost like he has a big bicep like the logo_large variation i uploaded

4) can i see the next version with an inverted look as well - as if i need it screened in white on a black shirt.

thank you!!!
14 years ago
 
Logo Designer
Here is the revised version on black.

(This comment references Entry #17)
14 years ago
 
Logo Designer
and on white - revised

(This comment references Entry #18)
14 years ago
 
Client
i love #17 and #18

the 2 things i would want to see are:

1) the beak is too "smooth" - check out the raven software logo i uploaded and its not "jaggy", but its more pronounced where it changes direction...do you know what i mean?

2) if the eye/he could look even a little meaner

3) i like how you added more wing. could you make it look more like a "bicep" like hes a big ass strong birs and put less white in it. i find my eye being drawn to that top part of the wing that has more white accent in it then the rest of the bird.

im really liking it!
14 years ago
 
Logo Designer
please tell me if you would like to see it also on black or with other modifications

(This comment references Entry #34)
14 years ago
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