Thanks for your submission - I think I went to Bally's fitness too many years but, the "R" in #16 reminds me a bit of their logo. It's an interesting direction just wondering if we could give it a twist of difference?
The "RATIONIZE" word below - I'm thinking to give it some prominence - if you think of this word as a "stamp" or where you have an ink pad and a stamp and stamp it on a page - what does that make you think of - something bold or a statement I buess.
Hello - I was thinking more about #35 and would love to see this "RATIONIZE" but with one thicker line vs. 2 and again in the "stamp" mode like you have the text if that makes sense.
Also - would be interesting to see this same logo with a red background and logo white or black just to get a feel for it and compare.
Did you want those level or tilted? With the red background, one of each has an outline of the other, and the other set has the shadow of the other color behind it (black/white).
You know the bite in #36 - was wondering what your #52 would look like with a thicker red outline and a bite out of the top left corner and a tiny bit of the "R" would look like... hum.
Possible to see? #52 as-is is very strong as well.
The red border is 2pts wider and a little closer to the word, it was a bit more difficult to determine the bite mark with the extra white space between the border and R. Another version with a thicker border and a little space will be following.
#85 - last question on this one if we did another version of it. If you didn't have the box around it yet framed the word in another powerful way, what would you do to make it jump out? I'm just looking for comparisons - doesn't have to be a box - could be anything to make it jump out.
Wow, that Insanity logo is pretty similar, it even has the tilt. Do you want these without the tilt then? What about the red background one with the bite out and a black border around the back red banner, would you like to see how that one would look?