RaptorLogo Design Contest

of course... we can fix the detail later on a larger file

For me it is perfect. I would already like to end the contest. Some smaller adjustements can be discussed, when I have a larger file of it.
Really nice work!

#134

Awesome! I felt in love. In which of your proposals did you use this eye?

here's the eye

okay sure

... veins little bit darker, more contrast

can you give me the eye a little bit larger? Difficult to judge

what about this?... this is more detail veins and darker

okay sure

I prefer this, the logo in whole looks more harmonic (but it is really difficult to judge about details with these small pictures). You could try to give the veins even a little bit more contrast.

this have little bit darker veins on iris

this have iris less-yellow...

this have iris color like previous #58

correct. No worries, we are on a very good way.

oh okay, is it just like the previous version, little bit greener... sorry for my mistake.

no, sorry, this is a misunderstanding. The pupil (the black part in the middle) needs to stay black. The rest of he eyeball, which now is yellow should be adjusted into a more green tone

iris only like this?

yes, great. Now one trial to make the Iris of the eye also more green, so that it fits better as a unit.

here's raptor only if you need to review the raptor

is this green is right?... I also made the eyeball "O" bigger

Could you do me the favor, just to try how it looks:
a) make the skin of the Raptor a Little bit more dark green (less olive, less yellow potion in the green)
b) then adjust the color of the eye more to the skin color
c) the eye could be opened up a little bit wider, therefore
the rim of the eye could be a little bit thinner

Thank you in advance

Thank you Sir...

It´s really, really good!!! I find it even better with the small letters, to be honest.

one last Trial for today, if you don´t mind: I gues, we have too many different Colors. Possible, to work out the eye in green/yellow-green tones instead of orange/yellow?
And maybe a little veiny eye/Iris?
Thanx

Hi, very fast, thanks. Difficult to decide, both are really good.

Hi Sir, The update is #41

WOW!!! Great.
Just for the sake of comparing: can you give me this proposal also once without the eye, but wit a normal "o", pls?

Just an additional remark: I was wondering, why I wanted to have the Raptor´s head refined. The shape isn´t that bad. I guess, it is the lower jaw (which now is allmost White, which creates the Irritation. If you would stay more in a dark green with some more typically reptile kind of surface/skin (e.g. see here: http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/jurassicpark/images/1/12/Velociraptor-detail-header.png/revision/latest?cb=20150420213742).

Thank you Sir, I'll fix and enhance it...

Really nice execution.
I would apprciate, if you could work a little bit on the Raptor's eye in th letter "O". It should show more the typical, oval shape of a reptile' s eye.
The raptor itself also can be optimised. Some more teeth as well as the shape of the head, which looks now more than a T-Rex than a Raptor.
Finally it's worth trying to elaborate the "R" a bit better, so that the word "Raptor" is easier to read as a unit.
But again: so far the best entry!