RaptorLogo Design Contest

Hi Cetakaos, thank you so much for all your efforts. I still found #57 very attractive. But the font was not really good (way too normal, too much Standard font) and the Raptor itself did not convince me.
The eye of #57 is awesome.

hi Citation,
here my new concept....
what do you thing? any other suggestion?

best rgd, cetakaos

thanks for your feedback Citation,
here my revision..
what do you thing?

pls no outline on the font. You Need to separate the single letters more from each other, especially the "P" and the "T". And there must be a cler readable "O".
A Raptor´s head in the letter R would be nice, but it should be clearly a unit with the letter (like your #21). In #21 it si no raptor, but the Reptile and the letter belong together.
Here in you #44 the Reptile just is place on the letter (and still is not refined good enough).

any other suggestion ?

regarding the raptor: look at this example: http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/jurassicpark/images/1/12/Velociraptor-detail-header.png/revision/latest?cb=20150420213742

Just an addition: your proposal has a really strong Appeal already. So if you spend some time to work it over according to my remarks, it could become even stronger.

I like this refined Approach. The eye is great. But it Needs to be clearer, that this also is the letter "O". So the "T" and the "R" at the end should be more separated.
The raptor itself in the letter "R" looks more like a crocodile than a raptor. You need to lookup the raptor in the web, I guess.

hi Citation,
any feedback for my entry ?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.

rgd, cetakaos