RaptorLogo Design Contest

new update

camouflage design !

Updated !

Can you provide some reference to raptor eye close up ?

this font is great. The eye still Needs to bemore in the shape of an raptor´s eye, it´s still too regular and too round.
If you look at other proposals, you will see, what I mean.
Finally: try a darker set of green/yellow green tones for the itris.

new font

okay I guessed you want the following tagline .
Thanks for clearing it out

.... I mean: no claim at all. Neither "surveillance camera" nor anything else

updated !

pls without Claim/subline

pls allways without claim.../subline

added details to the eye .

Updated !

ok, light and shadow....
better: small letters
worse:
the letter "r" worsened. In the previous proposal it looked more like a single raptor´s claw

the form/shape of the letter "o" needs to be closer to the form of a raptor´s eye (more like in the example-link, i have sent to you)
also the colors of the eye are not really convincing me. other entries are better, e.g. fifteen and twentyone

feedback please

Hi CH ,

Actually I was trying to come up with an unique typeface . Thanks for the rank anyways I will update as requested.

Regards
Surya

I like the small letter "r", which could even look more like asingle claw.
The "o" should be a Little bit more oval like a typical raptor´s eye (see here: http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/jurassicpark/images/1/12/Velociraptor-detail-header.png/revision/latest?cb=20150420213742)
and could you please try to use only small letters. THe capitals "PT" look strange.

pls without Claim!

feedback please :)