thank you so much for your rank and feedback, here's my revised version (#70 and #71) hope you like it. I just want to let you know that we still can revise the logo even after the contest done. I will help you to revise the logo as you desired. and also you can have all the logo in all color variations you want. you don't have to worry. I'll do the best for you. So you can pick me as the winner and we can keep continue working this logo whenever you want. You can count on me. Thanks again.