Hi!
We want to move forward with this design, but streamline it a little more. Can we please see:
1. The water from #47.
2. Make the leaf much smaller and/or change it to look like the plant in #50.
3. Use the solid oak as in #47, but make it off-center or less prominent.
4. What ideas do you have for a home/neighborhood feel? The idea I gave you with just having the rooftops made people feel like the houses were getting flooded, so I led you in the wrong direction there. Sorry :/ But the group wanted to see something house-like, even if it's fairly abstract.
Do these modifications make sense?
Fantastic work. The group still wants to see this with no raindrop frame. Can you make the circle have the leaf shape, and keep elements of water, oak and roofline just inside the circle?
The group didn't like the flower idea I suggested to you. Sorry. Can you take out the flower and put a tree in (like an oak possibly)? And make the right side of the drop blue like in some of your other versions. I really like the water in this one. Please try a different font.
The group is loving the emblem feel. Keep going with this. Some suggestions: Keep the circle but remove the raindrop shape in the middle. Remove the flowers and try these three things: water as you have it, an abstract oak tree *or* prairie grasses, and maybe a few abstract rooflines (as simple as ^) to indicate that we're not all wilderness. Use stronger, simplified, and more masculine lines to balance it out. Keep the name around the outside, but try a different font, like Times New Roman but more interesting.
This one is also popular with the group. Can we experiment a little with a few elements? Remove one of the large green leaves (so it looks less like a hug), and remove the small blue rain drops. If it doesn't look overcrowded, possibly add a human element (like your other design), or more vegetation (Echinacea silhouette maybe??).
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We want to move forward with this design, but streamline it a little more. Can we please see:
1. The water from #47.
2. Make the leaf much smaller and/or change it to look like the plant in #50.
3. Use the solid oak as in #47, but make it off-center or less prominent.
4. What ideas do you have for a home/neighborhood feel? The idea I gave you with just having the rooftops made people feel like the houses were getting flooded, so I led you in the wrong direction there. Sorry :/ But the group wanted to see something house-like, even if it's fairly abstract.
Do these modifications make sense?
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There is some mistake on one of my work, I withdraw it now and will resubmit soon, have a nice day!
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We really like the colors, color gradient, incorporation of plants, water and motion, as well as the overall layout.
The majority of our crew wants to move away from the dots.
We may opt to just drop the tagline, but definitely would like to try a different font.
Thank you!