I think this slogan "Where the connection transforms" is better. It brings in front and It puts accent on a single item among the others: THE connection
If the slogan was "Where connections transform" it also sounded good but there wouldn`t be a leading element among them. It wouldn`t sound as good as the above one.
I apologize I can`t explain better but it`s about how I feel about it rather than a rational explanation.
I have a question for you. It was suggested that we add "the" in the tagline but not sure which sounds better. Basically, the circle is where a connection is found after working in a circular manner and all are focused on coming to the center to connect above all differences no matter what. It involves specific guidelines where if done properly, all come to feel interconnectedness as one. Based on that description, which tagline sounds better to you?
Thank you, can you increase the luminosity of the logo itself, and of the tagline/ changing tagline to "where the connection transforms". Place a single turquoise dot in the heart center.
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We are intrigued by this design and trying to determine what the brand colors should be. We took the Kaye Putnam Brand Archetype Quiz and the results were The Magician. kayeputnam.com - Can you try these colors on the logo?
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If the slogan was "Where connections transform" it also sounded good but there wouldn`t be a leading element among them. It wouldn`t sound as good as the above one.
I apologize I can`t explain better but it`s about how I feel about it rather than a rational explanation.
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Please feel free to ask for revisions.
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Leslie
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I hope you`ll like the concept.
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What do you think?
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I`m here if you want to see further revisions.
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Please let me know if you would like to see any revisions (fonts, colors, layout etc).
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