I like the sunrise and the people holding the roof...maybe too churchy - this is a school roof...make the people images more childlike? More school-focused, less church?
Hi. Thank you for the ranking and the feedback. I have uploaded some designs based on your feedback. Please let me know if you would like to see any further changes.
Hi. We are strongly leaning toward your design. Would you please put St. Patrick School as the main writing (where you have Raise the Roof), and put Raise the Roof under that.
Thank you for your interest in my design. I have uploaded some revisions as you requested. Please let me know if you would like to see the text in bigger/smaller size.