very nice. we liked the martini glass, instead of a pole, but the woman on the pole is a bit much. We want to be more subtle, so having her on the side would make sense or even not using the woman silhouette.
#10 - I would not have the red shadow on the rainmaker name - to keep it simple. I think overall we rather emphasize the name and not rely on the glass or woman as much, if at all.
Can we ask you to make a few changes to it? I think we'd like to see this design with (1) silver lettering, (2) font like #20 (style and with slightly larger "R"s), and (3) maybe add a "glow" like #3.
Also, the script "guide" looks good, but we also like the "guide" in #17, so please show us some variation there too.
Love the changes. Can we see some additional variants?
- Can we take the focus off the "M" (which currently has a sparkle) and place it on the "R"s, like in #35, etc. - I think the second "R" is larger than the first. Can we make them the same size? - We like the red haze around some of the other designs, like #3. Can we incorporate that effect into your design to see how it would look? The red "glow" could just sit above your design (e.g., #29).
StormOwl, i just want to thank you for all the great feedback. It was very helpfull and certain, very clear. I dont know if i will be the lucky one (that would be great!), but even if im not, i want you to know that i enjoyed working with you. Is great when CH give us instructions and you got involved and always been close to the designers community during the contest.
Thanks for doing that so quickly as usual. I think that pretty much does it for us, we'll be in touch as soon as we all have one last meeting to review.
Is it easy for us to stretch the box for #120 vertically so it's square? If it's easy enough to do I won't ask you do it, I just want it square so it looks right on the iPhone. Can i just take the one for #122 as a layer and make it fit?
This is the last one, I PROMISE ;) #124, can you make the M a little clearer...it kinda looks like RVI instead...it's clear to us but we aren't sure it will be for other people. And, can you shrink it so it fits inside the border a little better...the shine is getting a little cluttered. You have my vote, we'll probably be deciding tomorrow so we'll have good news for you!
Yes, you right, i didnt see the IV until you point it out. Let me work on it. And please dont worry about making suggestions to make a better logo. We wont going from here until you feel completly happy. Doesnt matter how much it take. Your money worth it. So, lets work together until everything looks perfect.
It's refreshing to work with someone who is as professional and diligent as you are and we greatly appreciate it.
#125 is close, but let's try this if you are up for it. Make the left side of the M larger like the right side, connect the M and R only at the bottom and put the girl in the middle between them. We can put the twinkle back on the R too.
My colleague asked if we see one version with the "Rainmaker Guide" text and one version without like #122, but make sure to keep the box square.
Also, I'm assuming it's easy to alter these images to have white background correct? I know enough Photoshop to make those kind of changes, I'm assuming these images will all have layers to them?
Yes, but i prefer to make all this changes myself, when we complete this contest, you can ask me for all the variations you could need. Maybe you will need some objects separated, or maybe with diferent backgrounds. I will provide you of all this with a good resolution (if you need pixels for web) or in vector (all my work is in vector, even the twinkle).
If you need this in a psd file, i will give you the logo that way too.
Thank you, let me work together this new suggestions. Maybe in a couple of hours i will submit something new.
Awesome, these are looking much better. Don't worry about the white background just yet, let's get it down to the final few. Can we try to make the left part of the M a little thicker for #127 ad #128?