Hello Stormowl, A new entry! I work the eye less bold as you asked ! Don't hesitate if you want to try something else: an other font, color.... Best regard Dinou45
We like #22 better, it's definitely more clear now that it's a man's eye. Can you make the font for Guide less feminine and more clear, it's a bit hard to see. Can you also try and use black a bit more instead of the white, maybe invert some of the colors. We really like your style so if you have any other interpretations, using a dollar bill somehow, conveying the rain aspect, etc. we'd be excited to see it. Thanks!