Hi Kassai,
180 is our choice. Just a few final tweaks. The IA pairing is reading as an N. I know we can't solve that entirely, but let's make the crossbar of the A more noticeable with fewer scratches, making it whiter. Also please nudge wider space between I and A -- still connecting, but more like the R and A (you'll probably need to expand the overall logo width a bit to the left).
Could you provide a reverse version over white along with this design for final delivery?
I think we are VERY close to this being what we want. Can you just give me a couple where the radiation symbol is a little smaller...so it doesn't extend so far outside of the white box?
I'm not really a big fan of the I being used as the cross. I'm assuming you like the look of the balance in the logo with it being centered, but it feels a little busy to me. Can you please make the changes as originally requested, just so I can see for myself? I'd like to see the "T" as the cross, and have it slightly larger, from the bottom to the top of the box, so it stands out a bit. And the radiation symbol behind it, offset to the right of the logo. I'd like to see it with both the radiation symbols, the one from 157 and 159. Thanks so much!
Dear Sir,
This is the updates, I try to incorporate the cross to letter "i" and let the radiation symbol as it is. it's centered well, more balance also conveys the idea of "radiating Jesus". the combinations on #175, #174 and #173.
This is good too. I'm just thinking the radiation symbol smaller, and right behind the "t", which is changed to look more like a cross...maybe even slightly larger than the other letters? Just thinking out loud...
I think you tried to incorporate the cross actually into the radiation symbol on this one, which is definitely a creative idea and I appreciate your ingenuity, but I think it so meshes the two together that both get lost in it. Is there a way you can have the radiation symbol behind a cross...and incorporate into this design?
Thanks so much for the changes. This one is my favorite so far, and definitely captures much of what we're looking for, however, I'd really like to get a cross element in the logo...so it conveys the idea of "radiating Jesus". Is there a way you can change the "T" in Radiate to look like a cross, and have the radiation symbol more immediately behind the t (smaller if necessary), instead of right in the middle? Or if you have other ideas to incorporate the cross, I'm open.
Dear Sir,
I understood what you mean above, but I can no more submit the idea of "T" look like a cross, because have been submitted before by another designer. This is the rules in order to present you original design. I apologize for that. I just try to updated and develop the designs by the rest of Idea in #154, #155, #156, #157, #158 and #159.
OK, I think we are getting close to what we want with a combination of this one and the one with the blue (#23). Can you put all the lettering on one line with this font (the distressed letters), and then make the "T" look more like a cross (lower case t), and have the radiation symbol behind the T, and have it in black, and only seen because of the radiating red behind it. I know that's hard to explain, but it's like how you can only see the black cross in #23 because of the blue light behind it, I want the black radiation symbol behind the white t, only seen because of the red light behind it. Make sense? I think that might ultimately be our best choice. Thanks!
I kind of like the dark look and the subtlety of the cross, but it's too basic. It would be great if you could figure a way to incorporate a subtle cross into a radiation symbol.
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The revision uploaded in #187 and #188.
I'll send you both version (black and white background) at the final in various file extensions.
Thank you very much.
Best regards,
kassai
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180 is our choice. Just a few final tweaks. The IA pairing is reading as an N. I know we can't solve that entirely, but let's make the crossbar of the A more noticeable with fewer scratches, making it whiter. Also please nudge wider space between I and A -- still connecting, but more like the R and A (you'll probably need to expand the overall logo width a bit to the left).
Could you provide a reverse version over white along with this design for final delivery?
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The revision submitted in entry #182, #183 and #184 also white background version in #185 and #186.
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The revision updated in #177, #178, #179 and #180.
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This is the updates, I try to incorporate the cross to letter "i" and let the radiation symbol as it is. it's centered well, more balance also conveys the idea of "radiating Jesus". the combinations on #175, #174 and #173.
thank you so much
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I understood what you mean above, but I can no more submit the idea of "T" look like a cross, because have been submitted before by another designer. This is the rules in order to present you original design. I apologize for that. I just try to updated and develop the designs by the rest of Idea in #154, #155, #156, #157, #158 and #159.
Thank you very much.
Best regards,
kassai
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