This is good, but I'd like to see the graphic and the "R&R" side by side and the "Massage and Bodywork" below both of those. The "Massage Therapy" larger than the R's and Bodywork
Hope that you like the revisions I made. One question, is the "Mass...work" a substitute for the word bodywork? or just add it ? Sorry for my english . God bless!
Ok, this is where I wanted the wording located, but I do need the "R&R" smaller. I need people to see the Massage Therapy right away at a glance, so that definitely has to be bigger. It would be great to have "Mass...work" in one line like this but it would also be fine to have "Massage Therapy" stacked over "And Bodywork" in order to have to get the sizes right. Thank you.
Another thought that might work is if we keep the "R&R" to the side with the above correction (i.e. smaller and darker), but move "Massage Therapy and Bodywork" below. I would like the "Mass...work" to start beneath the graphic and run to the end of the "R&R". I'm really excited to see how this might work out. Thanks
I like this edition of the graphic. I would like to keep the "R&R" the same shade of purple as in the graphic and the "Massage Therapy and Bodywork" in black. Only I'd like the "R&R" a bit smaller still and the "Massage Therapy" a little larger. I need people to read that right away.
Hi, thanks for fixing the missing K. I'm liking this darker shade of purple, rather than the newer versions more violet shade. I would like to see for this design, the "R&R" a bit smaller, the "Massage Therapy" and bit larger, and would like to see "Massage Therapy and Bodywork" in black. I like leaving the "R&R" in purple. Also, I love the graphic and the asymmetrical figure in the middle. Could I see both arms stretch just a bit longer and let the "longer" limb on the right reach outside the circle?
Thanks a lot for the feedback. Please check this version. The hair was removed and also stars are removed. I hope that you like it. If you want changes, please do not hesitate to ask. God bless!
Hi, please check this version. I changed the font into more elegant. I also removed the extra arms and legs of a human X-formed graphic. I hope that you like my revisions. God bless!
I like the layout of this and it reads easily. What I noticed though, was when looking at it from far away, the smallness of the man with multiple limbs starts to look spidery. Up close or enlarged doesn't give that feel, but at a glance when smaller looks a bit creepy.
I like the warmer shade of purple. Not super into the hair. I think its ok for the person to be featureless. Also not a huge fan of the stars. It otherwise looks great.
I like the idea of the sunburst, but this has a very busy spikie feel to it. I do however appreciate how it balances out the size ratio between the graphic and the lettering. I'm not feeling like the hair is necessary.
Please check this version. I hope that you like the warmer purple as you like to ask. Also I tried to put some hair in darker purple and the "S" was removed. I hope that you like it. If you want changes, please do not hesitate to ask. God bless!
I like the ease of reading the company name below and the emphasis on the massage therapy, since I know the name is long. Unfortunately, I feel that this make the circle look a bit small and lonely. Maybe the circle could be larger or could have an additional greenish outer ring or maybe some points around the rim like a sun burst? And same as above, there isn't an 's' and the end of 'bodywork' in the company name.
One more thought is that perhaps the dark purple is just a hair too dark. I don't want it bright, bust just tiny bit warmer. Overall this is a nice contrast.
I really like the body design and the placement of the '&'. I also like the fade of the greenish color. I also like the company name rapped around the circle, only it's BODYWORK singular. No 'S' and the end.
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