First i like to thank you for your entrance in this competition. I have scanned through your portfolio and you truly have some nice designs that very much captures the essence of what we are trying to do. Focus on the human and its need to rest, peace and regaining strength.
I would like you to work some more on your inputs and hope you have some more ideas. If you can find a blend between beeing an investment company and the truly human aspect of life, i wold be very greatful.
The start with this logo is good. It´s sober yet has a certain flow to it.
I have discussed your proposal with my partner and we both like your design.
We do however have two proposals:
1. We would like you to add some more colorful elements to your basic design. Not too bright though. 2. We want you to add a "human element" to the logo.
:) Thank you very much. Your proposal is very stylistic and human with a flow at the same time.
While this is said the logo is fairly "flat" I would like you to add some depth to it. Either by invocing something in the background, working with colors or by adding some for for 3d effect/reflection to the text.
Besides that, good work and clearly our favourite so far.