Hello "Bordo",
Thanks for your submittals.
I like that you to use Marks and symbols, but i do feel that these entries are too hard for what we are looking to do. THe human element is strong in what we will invest in. The logo shall resemblence that. Also try to look at the japanese sign for Qi and see if you can use this. I have started ranking the logos and you can see what i prefer sofar.
I will look at your other work and see if i can point you in a direction
Good luck,
Michael