Thanks for feedback, sorry for late response last feedback received 01.00AM. Update proposal with more mute color and make hand more interlocking #208 and #209, let me know your thoughts.
2 requests. Is it possible to make the people's arms more interlocking? With only 6 people it looks more like they're holding hands now. Also, what if the colors were a little more muted? The orange jumps out a little too much.
I make little adjustment with the amount of the figures to make color more balance, so 3 color combo for figures (sky blue, lime green, and deep magenta) so the logo has 4 color combo and the text also has 4 color combo. What do you think?
Thanks for feedback, update proposal
- #199 with maroon on Puyallup
- #200 with deep magenta on Puyallup.
For both make food back and bread little bit lighter, also use sky blue and lime green on figures.
I like the text, but I'm second-guessing the rainbow. Could we try a new color combo for the whole thing? How about sky blue and lime green for the people. Some kind of maroon/deep magenta for Puyallup. Use the bread color for Food Bank (maybe lighten it a bit). Then sky blue again for Food is the first step, and lime green for the swirls.
Ok, about the text, what I meamt by "less blocky" was that I wanted to see a different font altogether, with more curves. Like the font you used on #156.
I like this. How about we make "Food bank" bigger and try some less blocky fonts. And could you change the horizontal lines to something a little more curvy?
Thanks for feedback, sorry for late response last comment received in 03.00AM. Update proposal
- #183 and #184 less blocky text
- #185 and #186 rainbow version
- #187 and #188 monochrome version
Let me know your thoughts.
I like the rainbow of colors, but not the smiles or the ears on the people. Could we get rid of those, and try a couple different rainbows, maybe some monochrome variations?
Thanks, Jefry. Can we try even more variations of colors? We do not currently have any corporate colors. The green & brown feels to masculine. We like the improvements you made to the people. Would you please try tweaking the figures a bit more?
Thanks for feedback, update proposal wo make slight variation for people #160, also try with different color theme #160#161#162, let me know your thoughts.
I like the previous version, with the people interlocking arms better. Could you replace the scattered veggies in the middle with something simpler, more iconic?
Looking better, but could we reduce the detail in the middle, or change that to be something more iconic. It just looks like a scatter of colored bits.
Love the hands, not the bowl (too much detail, it clashes with the other elements). What if it was a simplified food symbol (if not a bowl, maybe wheat, apple, bread, or something else), and then the hands could be symmetrically placed on either side--more equal cooperation, less a feel of just giving handouts. I'm thinking something similar to your other submission with the veggies falling into the bowl, but with less overlap.
Love the direction this is going, with the people in the circle. The overlapping arms evoke a nice "celtic knot" feel, but the simplistic shapes seem a bit clunky. Definitely not a fan of the illustrated bowl of food. The high detail there clashes with the rest of the design. Could you rework that to be flat like the rest of the logo? It would be nice to have something that looks great in B&W or Grayscale (no gradients please).
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Thanks for feedback, update with 9 person and 4 color #214 #213 #212 and #211, let me know your thoughts.
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Update with purple on text #210
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Thanks for feedback, sorry for late response last feedback received 01.00AM. Update proposal with more mute color and make hand more interlocking #208 and #209, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, update with new color themes #205 #206 and #207, let me know your thoughts.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal with new color combo #203 and #204, let me know your thoughts.
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Update proposal Puyallup more bold
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I make little adjustment with the amount of the figures to make color more balance, so 3 color combo for figures (sky blue, lime green, and deep magenta) so the logo has 4 color combo and the text also has 4 color combo. What do you think?
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Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal
- #199 with maroon on Puyallup
- #200 with deep magenta on Puyallup.
For both make food back and bread little bit lighter, also use sky blue and lime green on figures.
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Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, how about this? #194
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For update with less blocky font #192 and #193, let me know your thoughts.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal with Food Bank more bigger #189 also with new font with less blocky #190. For left align #191
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Thanks for feedback, sorry for late response last comment received in 03.00AM. Update proposal
- #183 and #184 less blocky text
- #185 and #186 rainbow version
- #187 and #188 monochrome version
Let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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I am update my proposal with tweaking little bit for figures #171, also with different color theme #172 #173 and #174, let me know your thoughts.
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Thanks for feedback, ok, I will update my proposal asap.
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I am also update proposal in mono color/single color #164 #165 and #165, as a preview for your consideration.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal wo make slight variation for people #160, also try with different color theme #160 #161 #162, let me know your thoughts.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #156 and #157, let me know your thoughts.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal :
#108 : reduce more detail
#107 and #109 : other option with different symbol in the middle.
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I am update my proposal #77, let me know your thoughts.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #35 #36 #37 and #38, let me know your thoughts.
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I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful
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